
7/6 c20 insanebyemail
Another disappointment. So much for your clais to finishing your stories. For the most part you write well but you never finish anything!
Another disappointment. So much for your clais to finishing your stories. For the most part you write well but you never finish anything!
12/21/2020 c20 2020 person
I am in love with this story, even though it was updated 8 years ago I can imagine the ending in my head
I am in love with this story, even though it was updated 8 years ago I can imagine the ending in my head
2/7/2020 c20 Guest
So I've wasted my time reading 20 chapters only to find u haven't finished the story, there's got to be a rule that only accepts COMPLETE stories for gods sake
So I've wasted my time reading 20 chapters only to find u haven't finished the story, there's got to be a rule that only accepts COMPLETE stories for gods sake
8/23/2017 c20 Guest
Yesss im so waiting for chapter 21!
Yesss im so waiting for chapter 21!
9/17/2014 c20 ashleigh
that was awesome! keep up the good work :)
that was awesome! keep up the good work :)
9/21/2013 c20 mawjessgmail.cm
OK, BnBfanatic, You prefaced this chapter (in May of 2012) that you are not one of those authors who leave their stories unfinished. Well, it is now September of 2013! I am new at reading fanfiction, but have read enough to hate unfinished work. You are a good writer; good plot, good characterization and good language skills. I was enjoying your tale, and now, sadly , must write my own ending!
OK, BnBfanatic, You prefaced this chapter (in May of 2012) that you are not one of those authors who leave their stories unfinished. Well, it is now September of 2013! I am new at reading fanfiction, but have read enough to hate unfinished work. You are a good writer; good plot, good characterization and good language skills. I was enjoying your tale, and now, sadly , must write my own ending!
11/28/2012 c20 lili200986
Coucou, merci merci merci, j'adore ta fiction et espère vraiment qu'il y aura une mise à jour rapidement, je tiens plus je veux connaitre la suite... S'il te plait, une suite, tu ne peux pas la laisser comme ça, elle est trop excellente pour la laisser inachevée, et pour moi fan française que je suis, ce n'est pas compréhensible alors je tiens conjure, écrit nous une suite et fin s'il te plait ! Merci d'avance !
Coucou, merci merci merci, j'adore ta fiction et espère vraiment qu'il y aura une mise à jour rapidement, je tiens plus je veux connaitre la suite... S'il te plait, une suite, tu ne peux pas la laisser comme ça, elle est trop excellente pour la laisser inachevée, et pour moi fan française que je suis, ce n'est pas compréhensible alors je tiens conjure, écrit nous une suite et fin s'il te plait ! Merci d'avance !
5/17/2012 c20
4Cranjis McBasketball II
This is absolutely fantastic and really well-written. More soon, please? :)

This is absolutely fantastic and really well-written. More soon, please? :)
5/16/2012 c20 HSMSupernatural
Great Chapter! Hope That Tony And Gibbs Get Out Of The Basement Soon And That McGee Finds Them! Can't Wait For Another Chapter!
Great Chapter! Hope That Tony And Gibbs Get Out Of The Basement Soon And That McGee Finds Them! Can't Wait For Another Chapter!
5/8/2012 c20
1somebody's sister
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I was so happy when I saw another chapter had been posted and was so mad when I was unable to read it right away...
Really really great chapter, I loved it! Can't wait for more!

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I was so happy when I saw another chapter had been posted and was so mad when I was unable to read it right away...
Really really great chapter, I loved it! Can't wait for more!
5/3/2012 c20 Julie250
Thank for another great chapter, its great to see you posting again. Thanks Juliexx
Thank for another great chapter, its great to see you posting again. Thanks Juliexx