for Slow Burn12/27/2010 c2 Ms. Unlucky
oh wow! This is really looking good so far. :D I really hope you continue! ^.~ Oh, and are you bringing in any other Superheros? 8D
oh wow! This is really looking good so far. :D I really hope you continue! ^.~ Oh, and are you bringing in any other Superheros? 8D
12/10/2010 c2 
7I'll Nom Your Soul
Loved the chapter! I hope you update soon. Your story is very interesting. :)
7I'll Nom Your SoulLoved the chapter! I hope you update soon. Your story is very interesting. :)
12/9/2010 c2 KP100
I'm soo hooked on this story now! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
I'm soo hooked on this story now! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
12/9/2010 c1 13DBack47
And now for a more formal review rather than the rushed one that I undertook this morning. Wow! Great writing, and I was duly impressed by your ability to mix action with dialog. However I will say that you need a tiny bit of more reaction from Static and Gear, hope to see more of what they are thinking. On the other hand, Danny P. has been done in a way that I have almost never seen before. The last time I saw Danny done in such a imaginative fashion was by the author "DiscordiantSamba" and you have outdone even his best! I do wish that more character work would be done on Danny and his...bird? pet? friend? whoever Pallian is! You are hinting at a radical plot deviation here that has me smacking my chops for new updates with some sort of...elders? Whoever they are. Oh and are you suggesting more crossovers, like Batman! Its going to be sweet no matter what you do. To be honest, this is one of the best fan fiction stories I have reviewed in December outright! Its a great story, just a few kinks to work here and there and...(ahem) NEW UPDATES!
Sincerly
DBack47
PS: I know you want 10 reviews before chapter 3, but if they don't show up (which would be tragic considering how good this is) please proceed with full dispatch and haste since your loyal fans are watching. Hope you see 10 soon!
13DBack47And now for a more formal review rather than the rushed one that I undertook this morning. Wow! Great writing, and I was duly impressed by your ability to mix action with dialog. However I will say that you need a tiny bit of more reaction from Static and Gear, hope to see more of what they are thinking. On the other hand, Danny P. has been done in a way that I have almost never seen before. The last time I saw Danny done in such a imaginative fashion was by the author "DiscordiantSamba" and you have outdone even his best! I do wish that more character work would be done on Danny and his...bird? pet? friend? whoever Pallian is! You are hinting at a radical plot deviation here that has me smacking my chops for new updates with some sort of...elders? Whoever they are. Oh and are you suggesting more crossovers, like Batman! Its going to be sweet no matter what you do. To be honest, this is one of the best fan fiction stories I have reviewed in December outright! Its a great story, just a few kinks to work here and there and...(ahem) NEW UPDATES!
Sincerly
DBack47
PS: I know you want 10 reviews before chapter 3, but if they don't show up (which would be tragic considering how good this is) please proceed with full dispatch and haste since your loyal fans are watching. Hope you see 10 soon!
12/9/2010 c2 DBack47
Excellent! Favorites immediately. Imaginative beyond belief. Gotta run to school now. Love your story though. The AU is fantastic although shouldn't this story be in the crossovers?
Cheers
DBack47
Excellent! Favorites immediately. Imaginative beyond belief. Gotta run to school now. Love your story though. The AU is fantastic although shouldn't this story be in the crossovers?
Cheers
DBack47
12/8/2010 c2 3Temp SKE
Thank u for updating! It waz pretty funy how Static and Danny were bickering! Ah, I just love fights...well, plz update soon because I really don't like cliffhangers (I like being the cause of it, not the one receiving it ;))
3Temp SKEThank u for updating! It waz pretty funy how Static and Danny were bickering! Ah, I just love fights...well, plz update soon because I really don't like cliffhangers (I like being the cause of it, not the one receiving it ;))
12/7/2010 c1 7I'll Nom Your Soul
Love your story! It seems like a very interesting plot and I hope you update it soon. One thing I noticed tough, some of your spelling is a little off. For example: you said 'approved' instead of 'improved' and you said 'to' a few times instead of 'too'. Otherwise, it seems good to me. :)
7I'll Nom Your SoulLove your story! It seems like a very interesting plot and I hope you update it soon. One thing I noticed tough, some of your spelling is a little off. For example: you said 'approved' instead of 'improved' and you said 'to' a few times instead of 'too'. Otherwise, it seems good to me. :)
12/4/2010 c1 3Temp SKE
Great story so far. Also, nice plot. Please update soon! I have many unanswered questions in my head right now!
3Temp SKEGreat story so far. Also, nice plot. Please update soon! I have many unanswered questions in my head right now!
12/3/2010 c1 Alliee
MEHH! UPDATE! PLEASE!
MEHH! UPDATE! PLEASE!