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1/7/2019 c1 emily
this is amazing 3
4/15/2018 c1 Guest
aww, this is super cute!
2/20/2018 c1 Guest
what
2/1/2018 c1 Ginny again
BEAUTY. I have never fallen in love with a story until I read yours
2/10/2011 c1 2Ticking-Crocodile
Aww I kinda wish this were longer lol~
2/8/2011 c1 21dmwcool1
I think I remember reading this story but I lost the link somewhere...

Anywho, I loved the slightly satrical/humorous approach you took here. Usually, when an author does this scene of the movie (including me) they have it depressing and dramatic blah blah blah. But I like the certain touches of levity you added in here. Like the sudden outburst from him made me LOL. And her reaction was perfect. And, of course, the last line. That is so Buzz ;-) It's utterly believable and entertaining. Please write more Toy Story fanfics, we need more authors like you in this section ;-)
12/6/2010 c1 Kaitlyn
AWWWWWWWWWW that was sooo good I was a little confused at the end but it was really good
12/5/2010 c1 7FanFicAddict02
We can't kiss through plastic, lmao. That's what you get for being a deluded space ranger and keeping the helmet on.

Keep up the good writing!

xxxxxxxxxShannonxxxxxxxxx
12/5/2010 c1 68Reeves3
We can't kiss through plastic. hehe.

Interesting start. I loved the belt and handle talk. Astronomy is one of my favourite things, besides writing. :)
12/4/2010 c1 39Phoenix-LOL
Yay! BuzzxJessie!

First of all, I love how you compared a 'temptress' to Venus, that alone made me love this story.

Also making demo buzz have a explosion moment about Jessie was my favorite part, oh if only they weren't separated by that marker box...

Overall, lovely work. Two thumbs up.
12/4/2010 c1 anonymous
since when does jessie wear a jacket? But this story is good though. :)

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