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12/7/2010 c2 Slytherin Princess 1313
Brilliant chapter! i loved it! keep writing because its amazing!
12/7/2010 c2 153Gamebird
Ha. For a moment I was thinking twas the Jabberwocky she spied through the trees...

Good job though! Better written than the first chapter, and I do *not* mean that as anything other than a compliment! Fascinating. The POV shift totally worked.
12/7/2010 c2 447Sarah1281
Despite all their arguing, I find the fact that Draco came back to save her and is willing to look for the exit with her to be quite promising. I love how Draco keeps mentioning all these authors and is shocked that Hermione has heard of them as well.
12/6/2010 c1 21Lady Moonwolf
Oohhh... I like this so far. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
12/5/2010 c1 Leenbreezy
Really good delivery and descriptions of their surroundings. I'm big fan of Draco/ Hermione and I loved East of Sun West of Moon so I can't wait to see what you're going to do with this! How long were you planning to make this? Update soon please!
12/5/2010 c1 Avalon Music
This is really good!
12/5/2010 c1 5jentrem99
Oooooooooo! Cliffhanger! CONTINUE PLEASE!
12/5/2010 c1 LianaRamsay
it sounds good so far...keep on going...

ps. please read and review my fics...

thanks,

haileyd
12/5/2010 c1 Slytherin Princess 1313
I like the start of this story! please dont drop it like some authors! i know u just posted today but keep it up! please update soon!
12/5/2010 c1 3StarkTeller
Please hurry back soon!
12/5/2010 c1 2EMCismylove
Really great start! Please continue!
12/5/2010 c1 37Saavik13
great start!

Very good at keeping them in char.
12/5/2010 c1 153Gamebird
You hereby have my encouragement to continue! I am still in awe of your Heroes stories, never read any of your other stuff, but I'm very much looking forward to this.

This was great! Good start. I liked Herm's "translation" of boy-speak. That was funny.
12/5/2010 c1 1Earelwen
Intriguing... I am not a Hermione/Draco fan, but I am a massive fan of yours so I'm reasonably sure I'll like this whatever you decide to do with it. I have always loved Draco from book 5 onwards too. You've done a good job on Herminone's point of view. Really like her approaching him in the same way she would approach Crookshanks. A very nice beginning and interesting spin on what is one of my favourite Harry Potter scenes. Looking forward to more! What's the room got up its proverbial sleeves?
12/5/2010 c1 9SlytherinPrincessxXx
Very good start. Can't wait to read more :)
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