for Nightly Love12/27/2010 c1 
13shadow halfbreed
wow! This is amazing so far!
The poetry is beautiful! Well done! :D
If it's alright for me to say, it was possibly a bit rushed in places, or needed just a bit of grammar work...
but honestly, it made it no less enjoyable! XD
can't wait to read the next chapter! (if I wasn't on a time limit I'd read it right now ^^)
Keep writing, cause I'm loving this so far, will read more asap!
13shadow halfbreedwow! This is amazing so far!
The poetry is beautiful! Well done! :D
If it's alright for me to say, it was possibly a bit rushed in places, or needed just a bit of grammar work...
but honestly, it made it no less enjoyable! XD
can't wait to read the next chapter! (if I wasn't on a time limit I'd read it right now ^^)
Keep writing, cause I'm loving this so far, will read more asap!