for Failed Experiments6/22/2011 c1 
1Buizelo
great, just great, the story is awesome, very interesting and attractive, just grabs you and never lets go until the end, the description of the characters is great too, i love kite and rapier, and the battle against vex was funny, but this chapter show my one thing in special, kite...she is a badass XD
i will waiting the next chapter, i need know how the history continue
see you later ^^
1Buizelogreat, just great, the story is awesome, very interesting and attractive, just grabs you and never lets go until the end, the description of the characters is great too, i love kite and rapier, and the battle against vex was funny, but this chapter show my one thing in special, kite...she is a badass XD
i will waiting the next chapter, i need know how the history continue
see you later ^^
12/5/2010 c1 1CursedZodiac
I like this chapter a lot. :3 And I like it when she says, "You sacrifice many to save one, while we sacrifice one to save many."
Iunno, I just like it. Though that's not always true, but it's coming from Kite and she doesn't know otherwise. xD I like how you did Raid in this one. He doesn't seem too.. motherly, I guess. lul
NOW WRITE CHAPTER TWO. RIGHT MEOW.
1CursedZodiacI like this chapter a lot. :3 And I like it when she says, "You sacrifice many to save one, while we sacrifice one to save many."
Iunno, I just like it. Though that's not always true, but it's coming from Kite and she doesn't know otherwise. xD I like how you did Raid in this one. He doesn't seem too.. motherly, I guess. lul
NOW WRITE CHAPTER TWO. RIGHT MEOW.