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12/9/2010 c1 13samsquaredd
No one cares that you didn't include Matt, because honestly, I don't see him at all in correspondence to Near.

Ah, Near would feel such a way, but life goes on. like the song.

Anyhow, I think this was written beautifully. I especially like the part when he's talking to himself like a mental. :)

And yes, I thought that chapter was adorable. Jesus, he was eating chocolate too~ sigh ~ I also like that chapter when he calls the president "chickenshit". *nods smugly*
12/8/2010 c1 11LittleFanGirl
Aww that was so sweet!

I feel so sorry for Near :/ Bless him (N)

I really like the line 'maybe that's why they like sweet things' It made me laugh quite a lot :L
12/6/2010 c1 12LeahKeehl13
This is really cute! I liked the last line about that's why they eat so many sweet things. :D
12/6/2010 c1 andromeda0909
Like it! Very nice and I was about to cry , I am too emotional sometimes. :)

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