for Finally Yielding
34/6/2016 c1 chochohime
This is so beautifully written! You captured her thoughts, doubts and feelings so well. A real littke treasure of fanfiction. Thank you for sharing :)
This is so beautifully written! You captured her thoughts, doubts and feelings so well. A real littke treasure of fanfiction. Thank you for sharing :)
3/27/2014 c1 Guest
Lovely
Lovely
9/10/2013 c1 Tardis2810
Hey! Loved the fic and I think that you did a really good job for your first time! ;)
/They fit together like a puzzle, like pieces meant to interconnect.../
This is a sentence in your fic that I thought you could just change to
/They fit together like a puzzle, like pieces meant to /connect.../
I think that you just need to change it to connect if you want to!
I hope that you take this as constructive feedback and don't react negatively towards this!
(No I'm not an English teacher and I don't plan on becoming one either ;) )
(Love the title as well!)
Hey! Loved the fic and I think that you did a really good job for your first time! ;)
/They fit together like a puzzle, like pieces meant to interconnect.../
This is a sentence in your fic that I thought you could just change to
/They fit together like a puzzle, like pieces meant to /connect.../
I think that you just need to change it to connect if you want to!
I hope that you take this as constructive feedback and don't react negatively towards this!
(No I'm not an English teacher and I don't plan on becoming one either ;) )
(Love the title as well!)
9/7/2013 c1 AKVintage
This. Is. Brilliant. I absolutely love the fact that you addressed Rose's struggle to choose to give all of herself to the duplicate Doctor when she was still desperately in love with the real Doctor. I felt like her anger and her confusion and her conflict were all supremely characterized. It was perfection. And then it got even MORE perfect when TenToo entered the story and...swoon. Guh. Speechless. Beautiful and meaningful and heart-wrenching and fluffy and sexy... Loved it all.
This. Is. Brilliant. I absolutely love the fact that you addressed Rose's struggle to choose to give all of herself to the duplicate Doctor when she was still desperately in love with the real Doctor. I felt like her anger and her confusion and her conflict were all supremely characterized. It was perfection. And then it got even MORE perfect when TenToo entered the story and...swoon. Guh. Speechless. Beautiful and meaningful and heart-wrenching and fluffy and sexy... Loved it all.
6/6/2013 c1 Guest
This was fantastic! Perfect blend of their hats caters, romance, and more. Great work!
This was fantastic! Perfect blend of their hats caters, romance, and more. Great work!
5/30/2013 c1 takk05v
your first? thats better than most peoples thousandth. a little corny but not in a bad way, great job!
your first? thats better than most peoples thousandth. a little corny but not in a bad way, great job!