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12/16/2020 c2 26TheBlueMoonRose
Why did you make sesshomaru talk in the 3rd person ?! He doesn’t talk like that !
8/16/2017 c10 1inuyasha16451
Awesome story so far and I can't wait to read more chapters soon. Please please update soon.
11/7/2016 c10 Inu-girl
Write more plz! Continue plz!
1/18/2016 c10 xXxOtAkU-444xXx
I really like it! **
12/21/2015 c10 8NikkiS71
Nice chapter!
Happy holidays!
B reading U!
12/21/2015 c10 Guest
So glad you are continuing this fanfic. Keep writing!
12/20/2015 c10 2blackangel150
Uh oh he's going to kick their asses
12/20/2015 c10 Marxou
Your description should mention the random brother addition. With him as an annoying addiction to the story, it's not what I'd expect from the description and it left me very disappointed.
12/20/2015 c10 jennifer.haleokeawe
Please update soon please please!
11/28/2015 c9 KIYU ISHIKAWA
Make another does Sesshomaru do?Does he get angry?Does he mate with Inu?I NEED TO KNOW!
10/8/2015 c2 1Kiochii
1: I can totally tell you cant stand Kagome I'M RIGHT THERE WITH YA! girls like her piss me off.
2: I love the story thus far! It's interesting and keeps one going on.
3: the only thing I have a hard time swallowing is when you mix third and first person words (?). I can understand jumping from point of view to point of view but it feels like your trying to mix a person pov with a third person view.
Best way to describe it is when you switched back to Sesshomaru which was done in third person but as you read further you had placed Kagomes words "we need to fix your wounds bef-" and put an I instead of He. You seem to do this fairly sporadically within the chapters but other than that is pretty well written. It'd just be a bit easier to follow if you stick with either third of first person view.
8/16/2015 c9 Edith47
The first nine chapters we're good start; however, add a little background on Kamikaze please. Keep writing!
5/30/2015 c2 hala
well dat was unexpected but I luv surprises. I really luv d story . I like 2 see more of dis
5/30/2015 c1 lil
I love this story
5/30/2015 c2 1Xenia Renee
Don't worry about the kagome bashing, she is my least favorite character
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