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7kgirl50
THEY FUCKED! WOT! OMG! This was hilarious and yet so heart wrenching! More please!
7kgirl50THEY FUCKED! WOT! OMG! This was hilarious and yet so heart wrenching! More please!
8/16/2011 c6 2NobleBoss
Hey, hope you've been well and though a bit short, this chapter was indeed sweet! See ya l8-r :D
2NobleBossHey, hope you've been well and though a bit short, this chapter was indeed sweet! See ya l8-r :D
4/3/2011 c5 NobleBoss
Thanks for the update. I liked this chapter lots! It was bold that Soi got her butt kicked but Hisagi's response to Soi about their wedding was very realistic. I can't wait for the next chapter and especially see who the masked assailant is and how Soi is gonna make up with Hisagi. see ya later
Thanks for the update. I liked this chapter lots! It was bold that Soi got her butt kicked but Hisagi's response to Soi about their wedding was very realistic. I can't wait for the next chapter and especially see who the masked assailant is and how Soi is gonna make up with Hisagi. see ya later
1/16/2011 c4 NobleBoss
Grrr, no cliffies! Nice chappie, lol I feel almost as confused as Soi Fon bcause she feels like how she did when the first met and thinks he's handsome but doesn't want to go through with the wedding. and man, its obvious that within the next chapter or two somebody's gonna die. How can Momo ever hope to defeat a captain and without getting caught! If she uses her shikai they'll know it was her; mask or not and besides for Kido she can't use hand-to-hand. For her sake, I hope Izuru obtained bankai in the underworld or this'll b a slaughter. *fwhew* rants are good for the soul! can't wait for your next update, and a special thanks for the shout out! :)
Grrr, no cliffies! Nice chappie, lol I feel almost as confused as Soi Fon bcause she feels like how she did when the first met and thinks he's handsome but doesn't want to go through with the wedding. and man, its obvious that within the next chapter or two somebody's gonna die. How can Momo ever hope to defeat a captain and without getting caught! If she uses her shikai they'll know it was her; mask or not and besides for Kido she can't use hand-to-hand. For her sake, I hope Izuru obtained bankai in the underworld or this'll b a slaughter. *fwhew* rants are good for the soul! can't wait for your next update, and a special thanks for the shout out! :)
1/15/2011 c3 NobleBoss
Lol great chapter, this one had me laughing with everyones emotional turmoil! but does Soi love Hisagi is the question! I thought this was just gonna flow into a nrmal wedding but between Momo's reVenge and Soi's feelings, I've got vitually no clue. I look forward to reading your next update! (I'm in suspense, this could go a lot of different ways) :)
Lol great chapter, this one had me laughing with everyones emotional turmoil! but does Soi love Hisagi is the question! I thought this was just gonna flow into a nrmal wedding but between Momo's reVenge and Soi's feelings, I've got vitually no clue. I look forward to reading your next update! (I'm in suspense, this could go a lot of different ways) :)
1/12/2011 c2 7kgirl50
omg girl this was so good i really liked how you set up the story and that it was pretty much self explanitory. i was so sad when you talked about momo not likeing her son. i was lik,e poor child! and dude hisagi is so damn hard on him self he goes 'she hatesme' i was like really stupd head waow if she hated you she wouldnt be marrying yah! and soi's a really bad lier hahahaha its kinda funny i love mayori i was a trip keep it up ill be looking forward to your upstaes really soon heck i might even let u use me labtop so you can heehee
7kgirl50omg girl this was so good i really liked how you set up the story and that it was pretty much self explanitory. i was so sad when you talked about momo not likeing her son. i was lik,e poor child! and dude hisagi is so damn hard on him self he goes 'she hatesme' i was like really stupd head waow if she hated you she wouldnt be marrying yah! and soi's a really bad lier hahahaha its kinda funny i love mayori i was a trip keep it up ill be looking forward to your upstaes really soon heck i might even let u use me labtop so you can heehee
12/19/2010 c2 2NobleBoss
Wooo! glad things heating up and by the looks of it we'll be recieving some action some time soon. Short chapter indeed it is but it leaves room for a nice set up and hints at what Momo feels towards her husband,ghost, thingy, idk but anyways enjoyed the quick read and I can'ts waits for mores! :)keep it up! and btw do you like chocolate chips in your brownies?
2NobleBossWooo! glad things heating up and by the looks of it we'll be recieving some action some time soon. Short chapter indeed it is but it leaves room for a nice set up and hints at what Momo feels towards her husband,ghost, thingy, idk but anyways enjoyed the quick read and I can'ts waits for mores! :)keep it up! and btw do you like chocolate chips in your brownies?
12/9/2010 c1 NobleBoss
Great story and I hope you continue it! You did a really good job on bringing the characters to life without being overly descriptive a.k.a. (excessively wordy) and the story is consistent from its predesessor(however u spell that) lol. The only thing that I think there was room for improvement for were minute grammar probs. like in the first paragraph u put 'torcher' instead of 'torture' or sense instead of since. no offense... I hope u update soon and your brownies are on their way! *wipes sweat from head and continues to slave over oven lol* chiaossue! :)
Great story and I hope you continue it! You did a really good job on bringing the characters to life without being overly descriptive a.k.a. (excessively wordy) and the story is consistent from its predesessor(however u spell that) lol. The only thing that I think there was room for improvement for were minute grammar probs. like in the first paragraph u put 'torcher' instead of 'torture' or sense instead of since. no offense... I hope u update soon and your brownies are on their way! *wipes sweat from head and continues to slave over oven lol* chiaossue! :)