for Gone Too Soon6/13/2012 c1 
12Kenny Grey
Great story, I have to agree it is very humorous. You should do a sequel involving Danny hunting down and murdering all of them in the most sadastic way possible, each ghost telling from their POV before being murdered.
Example: Fright Knight's POV
The ghost boy came closer, his green eyes now a bloody scarlet red. I tried using my Soul Slasher on him, but it didn't effect him in the least way. My orders had been to kill Fenton to ensure he couldn't kill us. The halfa's ghostly wail sent me flying. Still dazed, I felt my left being held to the ground by the ghost child's foot. He looked into my eyes with a sick and twisted glare before he raised my own Soul Slasher above his head and hacking off my arm.
Third Person POV
Danny watched and listened as Fright Knight screamed in agony. The screams were like music to his ears. He ignored Fright Knight's frantic screams for mercy and did the same to his other arm as well as his leg. He made a crude incision in The Fright Knight's abdonmen and ripped out his intestines.
"Please... Have mercy" Fright Knight pleaded weakly.
"I told you... You should have killed me instead of her" Danny said before finishing stabbing Fright Knight through the eye, piercing his brain. He then attacked a note to Fright Knight's mutilated corpse. It read "Skulker, 5 of your lackys are dead, and what I did to the Fright Knight will be child's play compared to what I do to you"
Skulker was definitely paranoid now.
12Kenny GreyGreat story, I have to agree it is very humorous. You should do a sequel involving Danny hunting down and murdering all of them in the most sadastic way possible, each ghost telling from their POV before being murdered.
Example: Fright Knight's POV
The ghost boy came closer, his green eyes now a bloody scarlet red. I tried using my Soul Slasher on him, but it didn't effect him in the least way. My orders had been to kill Fenton to ensure he couldn't kill us. The halfa's ghostly wail sent me flying. Still dazed, I felt my left being held to the ground by the ghost child's foot. He looked into my eyes with a sick and twisted glare before he raised my own Soul Slasher above his head and hacking off my arm.
Third Person POV
Danny watched and listened as Fright Knight screamed in agony. The screams were like music to his ears. He ignored Fright Knight's frantic screams for mercy and did the same to his other arm as well as his leg. He made a crude incision in The Fright Knight's abdonmen and ripped out his intestines.
"Please... Have mercy" Fright Knight pleaded weakly.
"I told you... You should have killed me instead of her" Danny said before finishing stabbing Fright Knight through the eye, piercing his brain. He then attacked a note to Fright Knight's mutilated corpse. It read "Skulker, 5 of your lackys are dead, and what I did to the Fright Knight will be child's play compared to what I do to you"
Skulker was definitely paranoid now.
12/30/2010 c1 6Phanton Flame
Hi wolfhead,
This was a wonderful angst story. Danny's a goon for not taking their threat seriously. I pity Sam...she did nothing wrong...D:
Although, I do wonder: Can a ghost's neck be broken? I mean, aren't they already dead? O.o
~M00nlite Maiden :)
6Phanton FlameHi wolfhead,
This was a wonderful angst story. Danny's a goon for not taking their threat seriously. I pity Sam...she did nothing wrong...D:
Although, I do wonder: Can a ghost's neck be broken? I mean, aren't they already dead? O.o
~M00nlite Maiden :)
12/9/2010 c1 28klrob
. That. Was. Cheesy.
Probably not considered angst... but it was still amazing 3
I actually think it's humor. But that's just me and my sick mind. Not the perverted one, the... disturbed one. Like, horror movies kind of disturbing. This was hilarious compared to any horror movie, but I loved it. 3
IT WAS HILARIOUS! Thank you for the laughter! 3333
Love ya!
28klrob. That. Was. Cheesy.
Probably not considered angst... but it was still amazing 3
I actually think it's humor. But that's just me and my sick mind. Not the perverted one, the... disturbed one. Like, horror movies kind of disturbing. This was hilarious compared to any horror movie, but I loved it. 3
IT WAS HILARIOUS! Thank you for the laughter! 3333
Love ya!