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7/19/2012 c1 3beautifuldreamer23
Aww I really did love this! Blaine and Kurt are my favorite characters. This is actually the first glee fanfiction I have read and now it makes me want to read more! )
9/1/2011 c1 dreamer 3097
this is good
5/3/2011 c1 2mypastnobodybussiness
cute, but sad too :(

you're such a naughty child... you make Kurt almost die

but i love your story anyway :)
4/30/2011 c1 5Incoming Grapefruit
I really enjoyed this story, you handled the characterisation very well. As other reviewers have mentioned, a beta reader to help with punctuation and sentence construction would have benefited the story as a whole, but I admire your confident style of writing.

I did feel, however, that the situation was somewhat...exaggerated. Don't get me wrong, you handled the subject matter much better than a lot authors on this site, but there were still areas that drifted into the 'not-quite-so-realistic' category. Kurt nearly dying on the operating table, for example? Not very believable. A person can survive for several days with a burst appendix (although they would be very, VERY sick and require hospitalisation by day 2), because it takes a while for peritonitis to set in after the appendix has ruptured. And he remained unconscious for the next week? That's just crazy. At most, he would have been under for 6 hours, if the operation had taken its toll on his body. But there's no medical reason why he wouldn't wake up after that.

"They tried to get all the liquids away from his intestines and take out his appendix but it was harder because the bacteria had spread so much..."

- This is where your story would have benefited from a little more research. The spread of bacteria wouldn't have threatened his life on the operating table - they would just flush the area and give him a course of IV antibiotics after the surgery. Also, the appendix is a tiny little thing, there wouldn't be a huge amount of fluid if it had only just burst.

But as I said before, I really did enjoy this story. A beta-reader and a little more in-depth research would make it top quality reading material. So persevere! You have loads of potential. :)
1/30/2011 c1 96thesoundofsunshine
This is begging to be continued. Look at that ending. Look at it! It's so lonely just hanging there. I'm done being melodramatic, though I would love to see Blaine ask Kurt out when he's all better. It would be wonderful.

Caitlin(:
1/11/2011 c1 20Ella Greggs
There were some nice touches in here - Finn pulling a big brother act and telling Blaine not to lead Kurt on, Kurt on morphine was very funny, all the Glee kids storming the hospital, Rachel in the lead. I really liked the last line, "life was just too short to go about life with a hesitant step." But I agree with the other reviewer, you need to beta this for punctuation. Some of the sentences were confusing because of the lack of proper punctuation, including apostrophes.
12/24/2010 c1 9ThatInvisibleGirl
Story is pretty good.

A bit of constructive criticism; mind your punctuation!

You seem to pack quite a lot into one sentence, without full stops or comas.

Thats all! :)

Keep up the good work!

xxx
12/11/2010 c1 Kurtsie
YAY! GO BLAINE! Awww, poor Kurt! SO glad he didn't die!
12/10/2010 c1 Almightyforest
This was great XD...I have no idea why but Appendicitis fics seem to be one of my favorite types of fics (okay weird brain whats up with that?)

I can just picture Kurt yealling out that he is Gay whilst high on morphine...and then his friends never letting him live down some of the things he must have said.

I would love to see a sequel to this :)
12/10/2010 c1 12Murgy31
This was great!
12/10/2010 c1 njferrell
That was great. You should do a sequel. Kurt's better and Blaine makes his move!
12/10/2010 c1 YouAreMine21
Aww! My poor Kurtie! I loved it!
12/10/2010 c1 23Rori Potter
That was amazing. Update soon.
12/10/2010 c1 thatgingerprincess143
Awww that's the sweetest thing

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