for CrumpleHorned Snorkack in the Cellar1/28/2012 c1 
5Lily Herondale
This was really good! I like the way you portrayed Luna's charecter. Amazing =)
5Lily HerondaleThis was really good! I like the way you portrayed Luna's charecter. Amazing =)
8/27/2011 c1 57FlashFiction
Awww, sweet! Luna is so strong and I really admire how she can believe what she does, even without evidence. Great story!
57FlashFictionAwww, sweet! Luna is so strong and I really admire how she can believe what she does, even without evidence. Great story!
8/4/2011 c1 49brahdley jims
This is beautiful. I fail at writing Luna, or ay of the major characters, so I really admire how well you've captured her in a few hundred words or whatever it is. It's lovely that Neville is sending Luna those messages on the Galleon.
Favourite. :)
49brahdley jimsThis is beautiful. I fail at writing Luna, or ay of the major characters, so I really admire how well you've captured her in a few hundred words or whatever it is. It's lovely that Neville is sending Luna those messages on the Galleon.
Favourite. :)
5/28/2011 c1 29Patrick the Stump
Awwwr, loved it :) Especially the line 'I can feel the rhythm of death pumping constantly through the walls'. It was very effective. The whole thing was very descriptive and I thought it was just great :)
29Patrick the StumpAwwwr, loved it :) Especially the line 'I can feel the rhythm of death pumping constantly through the walls'. It was very effective. The whole thing was very descriptive and I thought it was just great :)
4/23/2011 c1 82Bittersweet x
A lot of people portray Luna as completely calm in the Cellar, but of course she wasn't, she couldn't be. This was a very realistic typa thing. It was fabulous =)
82Bittersweet xA lot of people portray Luna as completely calm in the Cellar, but of course she wasn't, she couldn't be. This was a very realistic typa thing. It was fabulous =)
4/12/2011 c1 25Miriam1
This is a sweet look at what would otherwise be an awful slice of life.
You have brilliantly managed to capture Luna's whimsical way with words, and her bitingly accurate observations.
Very nicely done.
Sincerely,
Miriam
25Miriam1This is a sweet look at what would otherwise be an awful slice of life.
You have brilliantly managed to capture Luna's whimsical way with words, and her bitingly accurate observations.
Very nicely done.
Sincerely,
Miriam
1/18/2011 c1 allieapollo
Don't underestimate yourself. It was quite amazing. You should be proud of yourself. You had a way of writing with meaning, like really good literature has, without losing the casual language that less serious literature has. And that's a good thing, because oftentimes, really serious literature can come off as kind of condescending, pompous. Plus, it comes from Luna's heart, and one really feels as if one is speaking with her. I also especially liked how Neville was sending her messages though the galleon. That was a nice little detail I wouldn't have thought to put in.
I can't wait to hear more from you. ~~allieapollo
Don't underestimate yourself. It was quite amazing. You should be proud of yourself. You had a way of writing with meaning, like really good literature has, without losing the casual language that less serious literature has. And that's a good thing, because oftentimes, really serious literature can come off as kind of condescending, pompous. Plus, it comes from Luna's heart, and one really feels as if one is speaking with her. I also especially liked how Neville was sending her messages though the galleon. That was a nice little detail I wouldn't have thought to put in.
I can't wait to hear more from you. ~~allieapollo
12/28/2010 c1 97Bagge
How beautiful that Luna in her darkest hour was able to find hope and faith again. Well done.
97BaggeHow beautiful that Luna in her darkest hour was able to find hope and faith again. Well done.
12/14/2010 c1 Ginny-james.albus.lily-Harry
That was good. Nice, for your first one. It's almost like you are really Luna, which in all respect, is a good thing. You are the character.
That was good. Nice, for your first one. It's almost like you are really Luna, which in all respect, is a good thing. You are the character.