for Close Enemies7/15/2013 c1 
155Ally R. Swan
omg I love Bugaloos. I loved them and I'm sixteen. I was thinking of writing one myself awhile ago but never got around to it. Along with Pufnstuf, if you are familar with that as well. I.Q. is my favorite! :) So I'm glad there is a writer who like the bugaloos and I.Q. as well.
Hope you plan to continue this! I like it so far, can't wait to see the conflict between I.Q. and Benita's niece. Update soon! I like this!
155Ally R. Swanomg I love Bugaloos. I loved them and I'm sixteen. I was thinking of writing one myself awhile ago but never got around to it. Along with Pufnstuf, if you are familar with that as well. I.Q. is my favorite! :) So I'm glad there is a writer who like the bugaloos and I.Q. as well.
Hope you plan to continue this! I like it so far, can't wait to see the conflict between I.Q. and Benita's niece. Update soon! I like this!
11/29/2011 c1 14Bugaloosfan
You did a terrific job on the story, I really get what you are going for. I like it. I love the bugaloos
Some suggestions I think will be a hit are
How about if I.Q. drives back to the scene and he finds a girl injured laying on the road. He helps her and asks for her name and where she lives. She tells her name is whatever and she lives with her aunt (Benita Bizarre) She and I.Q. fall in love and they go on dates ect
However The other Bugaloos find out that what her name is actually is Benita's niece. They warn I.Q. not to take any chances but I.Q.is in lovey land
To end the plot, I.Q. comes to his senses and is just friends with the girl.
I thought it could be just an idea If you have any I would go ahead with it. Just thought of it. Hopes this helps
Another thing, Harmony has cockney ryme slang.
Some suggestions
whooper an holler - dollar
elliot ness- mess
purple n plaid- mad
penny in a half- laugh
apple pie- sky
gingerbread/lump of lead- head
jammy book- look
flicker n bake- cake
Hopes this helps
14BugaloosfanYou did a terrific job on the story, I really get what you are going for. I like it. I love the bugaloos
Some suggestions I think will be a hit are
How about if I.Q. drives back to the scene and he finds a girl injured laying on the road. He helps her and asks for her name and where she lives. She tells her name is whatever and she lives with her aunt (Benita Bizarre) She and I.Q. fall in love and they go on dates ect
However The other Bugaloos find out that what her name is actually is Benita's niece. They warn I.Q. not to take any chances but I.Q.is in lovey land
To end the plot, I.Q. comes to his senses and is just friends with the girl.
I thought it could be just an idea If you have any I would go ahead with it. Just thought of it. Hopes this helps
Another thing, Harmony has cockney ryme slang.
Some suggestions
whooper an holler - dollar
elliot ness- mess
purple n plaid- mad
penny in a half- laugh
apple pie- sky
gingerbread/lump of lead- head
jammy book- look
flicker n bake- cake
Hopes this helps