for You left, i moved on8/11/2011 c7 tatiana
nice chapters need to be a lil longer
nice chapters need to be a lil longer
7/13/2011 c1 Erwin Smith
I can't possibly stomach the rest of this "story" so I'm just going to say it here and now:
This is absolutely AWFUL. It's just one big run on sentence. Yes, you may have a plot but it ain't a very good one. It's been done a thousand times over, and it's getting stale quick.
Fix your run on sentence and think of an original plot. Then post it.
I can't possibly stomach the rest of this "story" so I'm just going to say it here and now:
This is absolutely AWFUL. It's just one big run on sentence. Yes, you may have a plot but it ain't a very good one. It's been done a thousand times over, and it's getting stale quick.
Fix your run on sentence and think of an original plot. Then post it.
112/20/2010 c1 Joe
this out, will change your life...do you recognize any of the people?
http:/www.youtube.com/watch?v=WgoPXGXqzN8
this out, will change your life...do you recognize any of the people?
http:/www.youtube.com/watch?v=WgoPXGXqzN8
12/13/2010 c1 im awsome
sounds intresting, please UD soon!
sounds intresting, please UD soon!