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2/19/2019 c18 noreenklose
I liked your story.
Thank you for writing.
A small criticism:
You need to look up the difference between plurals and possessives.
There, Their, They're are NOT interchangeable, neither are your and you're.
If you work on this little bit...90% of your stories will be much more readable. I hope you understand, I'm not trying to be mean...it's just that those few problems will clear up MOST of your errors.
12/13/2018 c1 rocketaleks
gg
9/3/2017 c18 Knight5946
Excellent stories love them both I hope to see more soon, with Harry and the gang revealing their armor forms to everyone and dumblewhore realizing that his plans r no longer possible ever
4/22/2017 c13 david.teague.3950
Another minor error you might want to change in future adaptations(or if you ever go and continue the Mystic Life Series), Hermione's birthday is to my knowledge in September making her 13 at this point in time.
4/22/2017 c4 david.teague.3950
I really hope the Whomping Willow broke some of Ron's limbs and the reason he wasn't in the Common Room was because he was in the Infirmary for medical attention.
3/4/2017 c18 irishman97
awsome story cant wait and see if you go and go and progess this story more
12/23/2016 c18 1The Deadliest Ride
What happened to the rest of your Mystic series? Still not complete.
12/23/2016 c3 The Deadliest Ride
Good read. :)
6/16/2016 c15 1Red the Pokemon Master
I still like how they're related to Homer Simpson's boss and Batman.
5/10/2016 c15 Guest
Simpsons? Seriously? Batman is awesome, but the Simpsons?
5/4/2016 c18 draco7347
love stories cant wait for next story of this series
3/3/2016 c18 Guest
Are you going to still write more of this? I hope you do so...
10/25/2015 c14 Red the Pokemon Master
I think you mean 'Leopard' Gecko, not 'Lizard' Gecko.

Also nice on turning Harry Potter into Peter Pan.
10/24/2015 c13 Red the Pokemon Master
So, Snape is Hermione's Uncle?
10/13/2015 c7 Red the Pokemon Master
That 'Power of the sun' thing make me think of the Solaris Knignt.
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