for The Storm8/4/2019 c22 Guest
dang it i need another chapter! if by chance you see this pls restart it though like 9 years have passed so you prob lost interest.
dang it i need another chapter! if by chance you see this pls restart it though like 9 years have passed so you prob lost interest.
2/5/2017 c21 
14Adraen
That's a really nice story, from the first part to this sequel, but I must correct a little thing here. The soil of the amazon's rainforest is some of the poorest in the world in terms of nutrients. There's just too many vegetals that absorbs those nutrients at lightspeed pace, you couldn't grow anything on it.
Other than that, it's a great story. I've not finished it yet, but I can see that you have not either, so I hope you will continue on writing.
14AdraenThat's a really nice story, from the first part to this sequel, but I must correct a little thing here. The soil of the amazon's rainforest is some of the poorest in the world in terms of nutrients. There's just too many vegetals that absorbs those nutrients at lightspeed pace, you couldn't grow anything on it.
Other than that, it's a great story. I've not finished it yet, but I can see that you have not either, so I hope you will continue on writing.
11/17/2014 c22 EvanRi
please continue this story I really enjoy it!
please continue this story I really enjoy it!
5/6/2014 c22 Guest
Whens the next chapter!
Whens the next chapter!
5/5/2014 c22 Guest
OMG this is unbelievable your an amazing writer and I can tell that u hav a writing style a lot like eoin colfers but maybe u could add a little more age appropriate humor please
OMG this is unbelievable your an amazing writer and I can tell that u hav a writing style a lot like eoin colfers but maybe u could add a little more age appropriate humor please
12/24/2013 c22 3Necromancer Robert ShadowBlade
It been 2 years since you last updated* grabs a M16* update now
3Necromancer Robert ShadowBladeIt been 2 years since you last updated* grabs a M16* update now
12/14/2013 c22 Sarah
Update! I love this story please update! PLEASE!
Update! I love this story please update! PLEASE!
12/14/2013 c22 Sarah
Where's the next chapter! I love this story please finish it! PLEASE!
Where's the next chapter! I love this story please finish it! PLEASE!
3/31/2013 c22 Guest
U HAVEEEEE TOO UPDATE! The high note means NOTHING! If u dont udate!
Please doooooo
U HAVEEEEE TOO UPDATE! The high note means NOTHING! If u dont udate!
Please doooooo
2/2/2013 c22 8Archangel's Blade
NOOO! why you no update? I love this story! PLEASE update PLEASE.
Okay, got that over with, now I can move onto the critic:
Great plot, I've got nothing wrong there.
Minor grammatical errors, but nothing major. Mainly misplaced quotation marks and the like
You are very, very good at keeping the characters in character. That's a very hard thing to do. It's actually better than The Last Guardian. I still refuse to acknowledge that as part of the series. It just does't fit in the AF universe. Dark magic, really? But this isn't about The Last Guardian, it's about your fanfic.
I do think this is a truly great Fanfic, and it could be a part of the series itself.
8Archangel's BladeNOOO! why you no update? I love this story! PLEASE update PLEASE.
Okay, got that over with, now I can move onto the critic:
Great plot, I've got nothing wrong there.
Minor grammatical errors, but nothing major. Mainly misplaced quotation marks and the like
You are very, very good at keeping the characters in character. That's a very hard thing to do. It's actually better than The Last Guardian. I still refuse to acknowledge that as part of the series. It just does't fit in the AF universe. Dark magic, really? But this isn't about The Last Guardian, it's about your fanfic.
I do think this is a truly great Fanfic, and it could be a part of the series itself.
12/7/2012 c22 Tawny
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! *begging pathetically*
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! *begging pathetically*