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2/19/2011 c12 KataTheGerbil
Amazing chapter again! I love them sooooo much3 I can't wait next chapter! D: Hurry, please?3
2/18/2011 c12 12birthofthecool
AAAAAAAAAAA!

You madam are such a tease!

The story is still excellent, but the short chapters are soooo annoying.

Okay, you update all the time, but each cliffhanger seems to be worse than the previous one.

Congrats' for keeping your readers captivated :-)
2/18/2011 c12 happywritingx
they are not going to get out of this easily. unless if holly and artemis go back in time and alter what happened to the elves and stop the Paradizo bomb. pleassssee update soon!
2/17/2011 c11 happywritingx
Well aren't they in a real pickle. Reeaaallyy good story please update soon!
2/15/2011 c11 KataTheGerbil
So... so... It's so exciting, like always...

This is maybe the best story what I am read in here.

Next chapter, please? 8)

sorry my bad english, buddy ^w^'
2/15/2011 c11 2Abelextera
i want more, this is AWESOME
2/14/2011 c11 2BrazeRancor
Oh damn. Poor Artemis. I'm glad they didn't force him to watch them 'experimenting' on Holly to get him to talk.
2/14/2011 c11 rainbowmouse
"Lets face it. You're just a kid. You should be at home, playing football or looking at pictures of naked girls."

When you mix that with the seriousness of the situation and Artemis creeping out the guards with some sort of hysterical laughter, this may be your best writing of this story yet (in my opinion) :D
2/14/2011 c11 2nekodreamstealer
That's...REALLY not cool. o.o
2/14/2011 c11 3cyanicism
Ahhhhhhhh! Don't let them die! But yay, Arty has magic! And Ha, I knew I was right about your previous plan! Cause I'm just smart like that! They WILL change the future, right? They'll escape and go back to the past/present/whatever and stop those murderous humans! They'd BETTER succeed! Oh, your story is riveting! I love it! So exciting!
2/14/2011 c11 unknown
omg i love the story so far

the plot is soo good

and it's getting intense!

plz plz plz post soon!

and happy valentine's day!
2/14/2011 c11 12birthofthecool
Plus - fast updates

Minus - small updates

Plus - A thrilling and enticing story

Minus - The author has a mean, mean, mean streak

Plus - I can't wait to see how it plays out

Minus - You remember that this is supposed to be Adventure/ Romance not hurt or anything. I really hope we'll see a light at the end of the tunnel, come next chapter.

Thanks for the entertaining effort.
2/12/2011 c10 12obsessivereader95
this is still an amazingly awesome! I HATE/LOVE CLIFFIES! update soon please :)

~or95
2/12/2011 c10 rainbowmouse
Stupid Minerva. There's a reason that no one ever liked her.

And this is a million times better than reading about time travel to a war.
2/12/2011 c10 1UntillForever
..woah...i really like this story
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