for The Storm12/20/2010 c1 friend of True-Violence
i like the sound of this, i think u could make a good trilogy out of this, but i cant wait for the next chapter to come out. :)
i like the sound of this, i think u could make a good trilogy out of this, but i cant wait for the next chapter to come out. :)
12/19/2010 c1 
1OrcaTale
lol I'm new to your stories and I just finished reading the first part! XD (Which took me 2 hours)This has been so much fun to read and it sure does keep you on the edge of your seat. As a huge Artemis and Holly fan I love the cute romance scenes between them. You're an excellent writer and I'm looking foward to reading more! :)
1OrcaTalelol I'm new to your stories and I just finished reading the first part! XD (Which took me 2 hours)This has been so much fun to read and it sure does keep you on the edge of your seat. As a huge Artemis and Holly fan I love the cute romance scenes between them. You're an excellent writer and I'm looking foward to reading more! :)
12/19/2010 c1 Artemis Fowl Lover
Sorry I haven't been on in so long but my mom won't let me because i need glass which i still haven't gotten yet (She at work and i'm on without her knowing) Anyways i love your work as alway and i hate my computer so i gotta go
Peace,Love,and Artemis Fowl
~AFL
Sorry I haven't been on in so long but my mom won't let me because i need glass which i still haven't gotten yet (She at work and i'm on without her knowing) Anyways i love your work as alway and i hate my computer so i gotta go
Peace,Love,and Artemis Fowl
~AFL
12/18/2010 c1 2BrazeRancor
An interesting beginning. Surely there was no way for someone to mesmerise ALL fairies? Guess I'll have to find out.
2BrazeRancorAn interesting beginning. Surely there was no way for someone to mesmerise ALL fairies? Guess I'll have to find out.
12/17/2010 c1 10not bitter just twisted
great first chapter! AS a DHBD veteran I know the story, but you might want to add a little explaination for new-comers.
10not bitter just twistedgreat first chapter! AS a DHBD veteran I know the story, but you might want to add a little explaination for new-comers.
12/16/2010 c1 holly ha la la la la la la la
Wow, this is very high-quality writing, I really hope you keep it up! Also, I wonder if holly needs a cutsey nickname, like arty has. that would be very amusing to see how she reacts to that, especially if it were suggested by foaly, mulch, or even artemis himself. I can just imagine the look on her face when foaly/mulch/artemis starts to butcher hollys name.
Wow, this is very high-quality writing, I really hope you keep it up! Also, I wonder if holly needs a cutsey nickname, like arty has. that would be very amusing to see how she reacts to that, especially if it were suggested by foaly, mulch, or even artemis himself. I can just imagine the look on her face when foaly/mulch/artemis starts to butcher hollys name.
12/16/2010 c1 hollypop
yesssssss! this is sooooo asoume! plz update soon i am so excited to see what happens next!
yesssssss! this is sooooo asoume! plz update soon i am so excited to see what happens next!
12/16/2010 c1 12obsessivereader95
keep going,and fast!...please?i love this story and i wanna know what happens next! XD
12obsessivereader95keep going,and fast!...please?i love this story and i wanna know what happens next! XD
12/16/2010 c1 Krystal
This was amazing. I just finished The damage has been done and I must say that so far this is holding up to my expectations. You really know how to write your cliffie-endings :P
Please update soon :D
This was amazing. I just finished The damage has been done and I must say that so far this is holding up to my expectations. You really know how to write your cliffie-endings :P
Please update soon :D
12/16/2010 c1 krevLL
Fate would have it, I finished Damage just two days ago, and already the sequel! I have to thank you for writing (and sticking with to the close) one of my favourite AF fics! Keep writing - I'm curious where those ideas you have will take them this time!
Fate would have it, I finished Damage just two days ago, and already the sequel! I have to thank you for writing (and sticking with to the close) one of my favourite AF fics! Keep writing - I'm curious where those ideas you have will take them this time!
12/15/2010 c1 4ghostsaliensteletubbiesohmy
oooooooooooooooohhhh! suspenceful! I adore it! :) Keep it up :)
4ghostsaliensteletubbiesohmyoooooooooooooooohhhh! suspenceful! I adore it! :) Keep it up :)
12/15/2010 c1 3cyanicism
Oooohhh, good job! I like this! Is Mulch going to assist our favorite Mud Boy in the next chapter? I so enjoy listening to his and Foaly's bickering. ;P
3cyanicismOooohhh, good job! I like this! Is Mulch going to assist our favorite Mud Boy in the next chapter? I so enjoy listening to his and Foaly's bickering. ;P
12/15/2010 c1 2The Random Person
i read ' the damage has been done', it was very impressive. i can't wait to see what is going to happen in this story, it definatly has potential ( in my mind at least). i wonder what will happen to Trouble and Holly...
plz update soon
2The Random Personi read ' the damage has been done', it was very impressive. i can't wait to see what is going to happen in this story, it definatly has potential ( in my mind at least). i wonder what will happen to Trouble and Holly...
plz update soon