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10/24/2011 c1 5Billy Bob 2010
Short too short. But thats ok. Anyway good job and till next time peace out and thanks for the fix XD
12/15/2010 c1 8Bandie24x7
Uhmmm... what can I say... uh, WAY to short... only 263 words... :/ Ummm you cut it off at a REALLY bad place... "backed out of the..." which left me with a WTF? uhmmm all in all a decent start... just make the next chapter... IDK better, and longer. :P Work a little harder on it as well... It truthfully seems like you made this in 5 minutes... lol Not trying to be a douche, but this is constructive Criticism, and truthfully you need it. :P -Yours Truly, Bandie24x7

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