5/16/2012 c1 DuchessOfDarkness
Name: Daniel Williams

Age: 19

Gender: Male

What book he/she is from: HON

If house of night vamp or fledgling: Red Vamp

Do they know the main characters from the book you used(Yes/no who): Yes, but not on good terms with them.

Do you want them to be romantically interested?: sure?

boyfriend/girlfriend, husband/wife?: none.

Bio: Daniel was one of the first to be exposed to Neferets plot. He was a creature of the undead the longest and it has tampered with his mind. He has a really dark outlook on life now. He was saved by Zoey and the crew, but was extremely bitter that Stevie Rae was changed to a vampire first. He doesn't want to accept Zoey as a high priestess as she was under Neferts instruction. Daniel had a troubled past. His mother abusive, and his father an alcoholic. He had one sibling, an older brother, but he had run away from home and never attempted to contact Daniel again. Daniel had hit a rough part in his life, he was starting to use drugs as an escape when he was changed. He packed and left after getting incredibly sick, he hasn't contacted his parents since.

Looks: He is medium height with straw blond hair and brown eyes. His cheeks are dusted in freckles and he has a lovely smile when he does smile. His tattoos are red intricate angular lines that intercept and knot around his body

Personality: Daniel has a quick temper and is very bitter. He is a pessimist and prefers to sit back and observe rather than engage. Only certain things can make him smile: Sarcastic humor, music, and certain types of people. He has very low self-esteem, even though he acts tough. He beats himself up over simple things.

Extra: If you were to pair him up with someone. They would have to have a strong, stable personality to balance him out. Also, if you want to use him for a bad guy, he could be the perfect anti-hero.

7/13/2011 c1 10ThePowerOfRandomnes1
Name: Taylor

Age:19

Gender:girl

What book he/she is from:twilight, harry potter, percy jackson

If Graceling what Grace and eye color:

If Fire what kind of person:

If PJO what God decedent:Posiedon

If Harry Potter what House:Gryffindor

If house of night vamp or fledgling:

And if Darkest Powers what species:

If Twilight what clan or area:Forks

Do they know the main characters from the book you used(Yes/no who):yes all

Do you want them to be romantically interested?:sure why not

boyfriend/girlfriend, husband/wife?:Nico DiAngelo

Bio:

Looks:

Personality:Nice

Extra:

2/21/2011 c9 PandaPandaPanda
fine by me :d

2/21/2011 c9 Ravenous Oranges
Take your time! Its good that you want to improve your quality of writing and for that I must say, "Good for you!" ^^

Will be waiting patiently for the new(and improved) chapters :P

Best of luck!

2/1/2011 c8 4jnmoore
This was a really good chapter! You're really good at updating. I really liked how we were able to get to know more about the other students. I still find it funny how Jordan is one of the few people who call Wood by his first name. I can't wait for your next HP update!

1/30/2011 c1 Tag-You're-It-Baby
There are many things wrong with this. (Delete my review if you want, I dont care).

1) submit an OC character is against the rules and regulations.

2) Your stories are poorly written with cliches and they all have simple words and hard to follow sentences.

3) You always use yourself, Erin, in your stories and make her stand out. It's very annoying and she's a Mary Sue, the way you write her.

Use this to fix up your stories, please, as they are in need of fixing.

PM me if you want.

-January

PS: This story was reported ;)

1/30/2011 c7 YouCrackMeLikeAnEgg
Hey! Are Rebecca (Twilight) and Bex (HON) in this story or not?

(To relpy, my profile is YouCrackMeLikeAnEgg)

1/24/2011 c6 SilverInk
Hahaha awesome! Morgan is exactly how I imagined him, you did a great job. :)

I can't wait to see what happens next!