for Seeing Bella6/5 c1 Juliasimon77
A quietly powerful work that unfolds with emotional resonance and narrative confidence, this story draws the reader into a world both fantastical and deeply personal. Its strength lies not only in the compelling plot but in its unflinching exploration of trauma , connection, and identity. The writing moves with the rhythm of memory and revelation, balancing lyrical introspection with moments of raw, visceral tension. Scenes shift seamlessly between tenderness and unease, capturing the delicate balance between light and darkness that defines so much of the human experience. It lingers not just as a narrative, but as an echo of something truer beneath the surface.
A quietly powerful work that unfolds with emotional resonance and narrative confidence, this story draws the reader into a world both fantastical and deeply personal. Its strength lies not only in the compelling plot but in its unflinching exploration of trauma , connection, and identity. The writing moves with the rhythm of memory and revelation, balancing lyrical introspection with moments of raw, visceral tension. Scenes shift seamlessly between tenderness and unease, capturing the delicate balance between light and darkness that defines so much of the human experience. It lingers not just as a narrative, but as an echo of something truer beneath the surface.
5/7 c8 Guest
Uhhhh WTF is wrong with the below guest writer? This story is very creative and engaging. Those below comments are needlessly mean! I’m sorry that a 12 year old is bullying you online Sherry, just know that your story is great!
Uhhhh WTF is wrong with the below guest writer? This story is very creative and engaging. Those below comments are needlessly mean! I’m sorry that a 12 year old is bullying you online Sherry, just know that your story is great!
4/10 c13 UnderWaningMoon
Committing myself to leaving comments because the recent guest reviews are actually disgusting.
Anyway, I’ve been really enjoying this story so far. It’s a really nice take on an original Bella and a nice take on a canon rewrite. I’ve learned a lot about blindness too. Looking forward to carrying on and seeing how much the story diverges from here :D
Committing myself to leaving comments because the recent guest reviews are actually disgusting.
Anyway, I’ve been really enjoying this story so far. It’s a really nice take on an original Bella and a nice take on a canon rewrite. I’ve learned a lot about blindness too. Looking forward to carrying on and seeing how much the story diverges from here :D
2/16 c51 Guest
What a waste of fucking time reading this story that turned into a fucking shit show
What a waste of fucking time reading this story that turned into a fucking shit show
1/19 c49 Guest
How the fuck do you write such a pathetic vampire in Isabella Cullen? Are you fucking stupid?
How the fuck do you write such a pathetic vampire in Isabella Cullen? Are you fucking stupid?
1/19 c47 Guest
Pathetic cunt had to have jasper feeling important. Fucking bullshit
Pathetic cunt had to have jasper feeling important. Fucking bullshit
1/19 c47 Guest
How fucking stupid. She could just fucking see like her injuries healed,there was no need for the additional fucking drama
How fucking stupid. She could just fucking see like her injuries healed,there was no need for the additional fucking drama
1/19 c47 Guest
The fucker leech Jasper should shut the fuck up. All the bastards should give Edward and Bella space
The fucker leech Jasper should shut the fuck up. All the bastards should give Edward and Bella space
1/19 c44 Guest
If the dumb fucker Charlie asshole Swan didn't leave then the accident wouldn't have happened so fuck you Charlie asshole Swan
If the dumb fucker Charlie asshole Swan didn't leave then the accident wouldn't have happened so fuck you Charlie asshole Swan
1/19 c44 Guest
The bitch Charlie Swan was a fuck up. He should continue licking ass with the asshole Billy.
The bitch Charlie Swan was a fuck up. He should continue licking ass with the asshole Billy.
1/19 c43 Guest
Shouldn't the freak bitch Alice be explaining her visions? She's written as an incompetent vampire who misses things in her vision of the future. Bella should have been changed before James et al appeared. Jasper is a dumb bastard and giving him an army title doesn't make it better
Shouldn't the freak bitch Alice be explaining her visions? She's written as an incompetent vampire who misses things in her vision of the future. Bella should have been changed before James et al appeared. Jasper is a dumb bastard and giving him an army title doesn't make it better
1/18 c37 Guest
Fucking cunt writer must have got a kick out of the bitch Renee verbally abusing and harassing Bella so she let them remain in the toxic environment
Fucking cunt writer must have got a kick out of the bitch Renee verbally abusing and harassing Bella so she let them remain in the toxic environment
1/18 c32 Guest
Now we wait for the James and Victoria drama
Now we wait for the James and Victoria drama
1/18 c30 Guest
Charlie Swan is a fucking asshole like in majority of the stories
Charlie Swan is a fucking asshole like in majority of the stories
1/18 c25 Guest
The smelling dogs are acting security for Bella. Billy and his pack can go fuck themselves.
The smelling dogs are acting security for Bella. Billy and his pack can go fuck themselves.