3/23/2017 c1 1Mismatched Melody
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FREAKIN UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP DDDDDDÄŽDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UUUPPPDDDAAATTTEEE SSSOOOOOONNN PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE I'M DYING FOR MORE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! DON'T LEAVE ME HERE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I NEED MORE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
5/20/2013 c9 7jh831
the chapters with in bloc form were hard to follow, breaking them up would have been easier for us to read, but good story so far
the chapters with in bloc form were hard to follow, breaking them up would have been easier for us to read, but good story so far
4/5/2013 c7 bluebells
can you add paragraphs please
this is sorta hard to read
can you add paragraphs please
this is sorta hard to read
7/5/2012 c7 KatieSooRude
This story is so fucking lame! I'm so, very sorry to say this, but you suck at writing. Maybe you should try writing another story not saying it will be good, just saying try again. Key word, try.
This story is so fucking lame! I'm so, very sorry to say this, but you suck at writing. Maybe you should try writing another story not saying it will be good, just saying try again. Key word, try.
5/23/2012 c9 Antara93
nice story but was wondering if dis was a bella edward story or not cuz i thot it was...
nice story but was wondering if dis was a bella edward story or not cuz i thot it was...