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7/31/2011 c1 13Girl Done Waiting
Ok I did get a little tinsy bit confused. Then I re-read it and it made more sense.

I felt you could have gone into a bit more detail at some parts, but it was very well written! I don't think Hermione as in charecter though, but she didn't have much to say really did she?

I liked Tonks though, I think you caught her charecter quite well. And Remus, very sweet. I love the two of them more than I love Matt/Mello. It was lovely written! I can't believe it doesn't have any reviews yet!

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