
1/2/2011 c1 C
YOU certainly have a way with words !
That was wonderfully written, I just loved it 3
Very good plot too. You did more than well, to say the least x)
Thx !
Happy new year, I'm actually sending you a box full of kisses...
YOU certainly have a way with words !
That was wonderfully written, I just loved it 3
Very good plot too. You did more than well, to say the least x)
Thx !
Happy new year, I'm actually sending you a box full of kisses...
12/29/2010 c1
16unjaundiced
I'm such a perv... I'm going to need to add this to my favorites list. XDDDD

I'm such a perv... I'm going to need to add this to my favorites list. XDDDD
12/27/2010 c1 D
I enjoyed this, I think you captured the characters really well
I enjoyed this, I think you captured the characters really well
12/26/2010 c1 Guest
Oh wow I was pleasantly surprised by this! Very smexy with serious undertones...
Loveit.
Oh wow I was pleasantly surprised by this! Very smexy with serious undertones...
Loveit.
12/25/2010 c1
7see1like
I want to tell you that I am very impressed with your writing style. I like your attention to detail and the way you descibe feeling motions and situations in high resolution.
I only want you to pay more attention to the way you place your characters is the physical backround, because you focus on their feelings, sometimes it seems like they are floating in an unknown space.
I think you show great potential here, keep up the good work ^_^

I want to tell you that I am very impressed with your writing style. I like your attention to detail and the way you descibe feeling motions and situations in high resolution.
I only want you to pay more attention to the way you place your characters is the physical backround, because you focus on their feelings, sometimes it seems like they are floating in an unknown space.
I think you show great potential here, keep up the good work ^_^
12/24/2010 c1 Myobu-Uzumaki
Subtle. Introverted. Innocent.
Somehow the story was written in such a way that spoke of those words above, and Iruka personified it in his characteristics. Even if you did not intend that, a beautifully written work always conveys differently to different people.
I also liked this story because it touches upon an inportant subject. Even though Iruka is only a character, his troubles, being ashamed of being a homosexual in front of others, it just reminds of all the prejudices out there. Who are we, how dare anyone, judge a person for what they do behind closed doors, about who they are. How can we call ourselves human beings, if we make others feel ashamed of who they arebecause they are different.
I guess this was more of a sexy story than a political or socialogical one, but that is what this story was to me.
Thanks.
Subtle. Introverted. Innocent.
Somehow the story was written in such a way that spoke of those words above, and Iruka personified it in his characteristics. Even if you did not intend that, a beautifully written work always conveys differently to different people.
I also liked this story because it touches upon an inportant subject. Even though Iruka is only a character, his troubles, being ashamed of being a homosexual in front of others, it just reminds of all the prejudices out there. Who are we, how dare anyone, judge a person for what they do behind closed doors, about who they are. How can we call ourselves human beings, if we make others feel ashamed of who they arebecause they are different.
I guess this was more of a sexy story than a political or socialogical one, but that is what this story was to me.
Thanks.
12/24/2010 c1 Fan
Omg! That's really unbeliveable HOT smut! Awesome.
Omg! That's really unbeliveable HOT smut! Awesome.