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3/6/2012 c1 203BubblyShell22
I really liked this story. Yes, I feel badly for Bridget a lot because of what she had to go through with her mother. It just makes sense that she'd feel this way and then have to comfort her daughter who had a bad dream about her dying. One mistake I noticed is that you don't have commas before the quotes when someone is talking. You have to have that unless you replace it with a question mark or an exclamation mark depending on the quote and whether it's an exclamation or a question. But if it's neither, then you have to have a comma there. Other than that, good job.

The Bubbly One,

3/28/2011 c1 20GilmoreGirlsAddict - Rogan Fan
awsome story
1/19/2011 c1 Hannah Dewe
why does Eric have to die i have loved his character ever since i read the first book and have wanted to keep loving him for as long as i could
12/31/2010 c1 Guest
it's good

but why does eric die?

think about it...

it's really good though

i like how she is like MARLEY

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