2/25/2019 c27 7Azkadela
OH MY GOD YESSSSSSSSSSS, PIRATES OF THE CARIBBEAN REFERENCE I WAS SO HOPING FOR THIS BEST WEDDING EVER!
OH MY GOD YESSSSSSSSSSS, PIRATES OF THE CARIBBEAN REFERENCE I WAS SO HOPING FOR THIS BEST WEDDING EVER!
1/6/2017 c28 Guest
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Awwww
1/6/2017 c25 Guest
Hooray
Hooray
1/6/2017 c18 Guest
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4/6/2012 c28 skdkja
SO MUCH BETTER! Gosh, this story was amazing and it taught a valuable lesson for the readers! Also, I thought it was hilarious when you pulled that POTC move in chapter 27
SO MUCH BETTER! Gosh, this story was amazing and it taught a valuable lesson for the readers! Also, I thought it was hilarious when you pulled that POTC move in chapter 27
4/6/2012 c22 skdkja
Well, great job Fu! Your arrogance has sent your son away with the very person you're trying to avoid! I think this calls for a quote
"Why can't we all just... get along?"
Well, great job Fu! Your arrogance has sent your son away with the very person you're trying to avoid! I think this calls for a quote
"Why can't we all just... get along?"
4/5/2012 c15 Guest
Beautiful... this chapter was the very embodiment of such a word. The deeps sorrow the two brothers felt at the lose of their dear mother and father; the resurfacing of hope and happiness at the reading of Husto's family. I hope that as I continue this story, that I come across other such amazing chapters.
Beautiful... this chapter was the very embodiment of such a word. The deeps sorrow the two brothers felt at the lose of their dear mother and father; the resurfacing of hope and happiness at the reading of Husto's family. I hope that as I continue this story, that I come across other such amazing chapters.
1/2/2012 c28 2omnomswritings
The ending of the story is immensely satisfying. Overall, the writing was past excellent - with the occasional error - and the plot captivating. Originality was at the heart of this, though I can't say for all of it. (The section were Po and Tigress were married in battle. That was directly from Pirates of the Caribbean.)
Other than the few mistakes, I was intrigued by this. The twists and turns within the story kept my heart pupping wildly and me on the edge of my seat, not daring to look away from the screen in fear of missing something.
I look forward to reading more from this author.
The ending of the story is immensely satisfying. Overall, the writing was past excellent - with the occasional error - and the plot captivating. Originality was at the heart of this, though I can't say for all of it. (The section were Po and Tigress were married in battle. That was directly from Pirates of the Caribbean.)
Other than the few mistakes, I was intrigued by this. The twists and turns within the story kept my heart pupping wildly and me on the edge of my seat, not daring to look away from the screen in fear of missing something.
I look forward to reading more from this author.
12/26/2011 c11 omnomswritings
I have read 11 full chapters of the story so far, and I must say I am truly impressed. The writing is done extremely well and has kept me entertained throughout every single chapter.
My only disappointments have been that the original character's personalities in this story are *not* like that in the movies. I find that the personalities of the original's are barely there and someone else has been placed in just to fit the story. Please, next time you write a story with the base of Kung Fu Panda, keep the original characters (Furious Five, Po, Mr. Ping, Shifu, etc.) as they are in the films.
Other than the above, I am impressed with this story and will continue to read on.
I have read 11 full chapters of the story so far, and I must say I am truly impressed. The writing is done extremely well and has kept me entertained throughout every single chapter.
My only disappointments have been that the original character's personalities in this story are *not* like that in the movies. I find that the personalities of the original's are barely there and someone else has been placed in just to fit the story. Please, next time you write a story with the base of Kung Fu Panda, keep the original characters (Furious Five, Po, Mr. Ping, Shifu, etc.) as they are in the films.
Other than the above, I am impressed with this story and will continue to read on.