for PS I Love You SasuXNaru12/29/2010 c3 Ellis
Holy shit...this is such a garbage story, and am not even exaggerating! You honestly need to learn how to write. I mean there is practically an error in every sentence, it's so ridiculous! Do you know the meaning of editing? As in edit your dam chapters before you post them? Maybe that would help, maybe...Because I just don't understand how someone can post a story like this with such obvious errors everywhere! Doesn't it click in your head that you have to fix them?
Aside from the stupid amount of errors in this story, everything is rushed, with no detail and description, it's as though you don't even know how to write.
So in the end, all you got is a shit story.
Holy shit...this is such a garbage story, and am not even exaggerating! You honestly need to learn how to write. I mean there is practically an error in every sentence, it's so ridiculous! Do you know the meaning of editing? As in edit your dam chapters before you post them? Maybe that would help, maybe...Because I just don't understand how someone can post a story like this with such obvious errors everywhere! Doesn't it click in your head that you have to fix them?
Aside from the stupid amount of errors in this story, everything is rushed, with no detail and description, it's as though you don't even know how to write.
So in the end, all you got is a shit story.
12/26/2010 c1 Andrea Lai
I saw this movie. This is such a copy! I can't believe it. People, just watch the real movie instead!
I saw this movie. This is such a copy! I can't believe it. People, just watch the real movie instead!
12/26/2010 c1 anime-obsessed95
I really like this...but theres so many errors that its kinda hard to read and understand...Anyway update soon!
I really like this...but theres so many errors that its kinda hard to read and understand...Anyway update soon!