
4/1/2016 c11 hay-linn
I do not mean to be rude but you spelt lawyer like this layer
I do not mean to be rude but you spelt lawyer like this layer
3/30/2016 c11 hay-linn
coach not couch
coach not couch
3/30/2016 c1 hay-linn
oooooooooooooo lala
oooooooooooooo lala
6/10/2013 c7 B
The song Matt wrote for Will is "the will to love".
The song Matt wrote for Will is "the will to love".
12/18/2011 c11
9Starstreaker
Hundreds of typos, yes but amazing story, amazing plot, and amazing ending...

Hundreds of typos, yes but amazing story, amazing plot, and amazing ending...
3/16/2011 c11
9The Demon's Reflection
i like the story. It's kinda iffy at some points and the spelling and grammar is kinda lousy (Sorry) but i enjoyed reading this. Keep it up.

i like the story. It's kinda iffy at some points and the spelling and grammar is kinda lousy (Sorry) but i enjoyed reading this. Keep it up.
3/16/2011 c11
89Lexvan
Pretty good ending. I like how you had everyone have a happy life in the end. Great job! Keep up the good work!

Pretty good ending. I like how you had everyone have a happy life in the end. Great job! Keep up the good work!
3/10/2011 c10 A graceful haze
hey your stories are great buut you need to quit it with the run-on sentices because im getting a little irritated with it. I mean what would your english teacher say
hey your stories are great buut you need to quit it with the run-on sentices because im getting a little irritated with it. I mean what would your english teacher say
2/4/2011 c4 Kalims
Matt almost screwed this up, but luckily, he and Will want to start over. And I like the spark fly thing, it's cute:P
Good job, looking forward for the next update
Matt almost screwed this up, but luckily, he and Will want to start over. And I like the spark fly thing, it's cute:P
Good job, looking forward for the next update
12/29/2010 c2 Kalims
Good chapter, it was really nice. I like how you showed what Matt thought of Will and how he found her different. And now they're meeting after school so like Matt said, score!
Looking forward for the next update=)
Good chapter, it was really nice. I like how you showed what Matt thought of Will and how he found her different. And now they're meeting after school so like Matt said, score!
Looking forward for the next update=)