6/13/2011 c1 Luna-fan
I liked it! You describe very well, and as far as I can see, you only spelled a few words wrong.

I love Luna, and this is something I could imagine Luna doing late at night in first grade. Really cute ^^

12/28/2010 c1 26Valier
^_^ So, you used your idea? That's great! This will probably become quite a good story if you keep writing! Oh, there is one spelling mistake that I saw, you spelt dying, dieing. Other than that, I didn't notice any grammatical problems, so good job!

Mew Mew Radish ='.'=