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4/2/2017 c1 reddir
Nice start! I think you really captured the style of both, very different, characters; also how Jack might view Maeby.
8/25/2016 c2 1Avenger09
Nice use of the in jokes. Really made me chuckle.
11/1/2011 c2 1Arekanderu
AD and SG? Overdose of awesome!
3/6/2011 c2 Sean Malloy-1
Great job on the story, I hope you'll make a sequal
12/30/2010 c1 16Ayesha Jen
This is the 1st bit of the story isn't it, I want the rest! Is Jack up on the General Hammond or other Ship, flashed to an alternate, pulled back from an alternate, what!

I couldn't see anything wrong as I read, I am quite willing to read through for you to check before publishing if you want. Your writing style seems similar to mine.

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