for Emptiness12/16/2012 c17 
3teddy meister
Yay! Update :D I can't wait for the next chapter :3 I missed Envy. I found this chapter kind of cute. Though it seemed a bit rushed cause there were a couple mistakes (you put "their" instead of "there", and there were a couole grammar mistakes among other things). Otherwise, great chapter as usual c:
3teddy meisterYay! Update :D I can't wait for the next chapter :3 I missed Envy. I found this chapter kind of cute. Though it seemed a bit rushed cause there were a couple mistakes (you put "their" instead of "there", and there were a couole grammar mistakes among other things). Otherwise, great chapter as usual c:
12/16/2012 c17 2Alliana-Darkwing
Wonderful! It's the only ans one word which comes in my mind! Please just don't stop this story! Yeah: ShikixSora, I love you, guys!
2Alliana-DarkwingWonderful! It's the only ans one word which comes in my mind! Please just don't stop this story! Yeah: ShikixSora, I love you, guys!
12/15/2012 c17 Deces
OMGG Update as soon as you can, please? V Haha I can't wait, Sora's dyinggggg. This might be kinda sadistic, but I wanna see Shiki despair :P Good luck with writing! :)
OMGG Update as soon as you can, please? V Haha I can't wait, Sora's dyinggggg. This might be kinda sadistic, but I wanna see Shiki despair :P Good luck with writing! :)
12/15/2012 c16 Lady Syndra
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
11/28/2012 c16 5Ficchii
This is tremendously awesome! It would be great if you update asap, no? There isn't many shikixoc ff around and yours are perfect!
Loves and Endless Supports
naf
5FicchiiThis is tremendously awesome! It would be great if you update asap, no? There isn't many shikixoc ff around and yours are perfect!
Loves and Endless Supports
naf
11/16/2012 c16 1Kyoki no Megami
haifisch;
could swear i've read this story before, but dunno if i reviewed...
anyways - interestng story, i think the unknown is the mysterious brother and hope you plan on continuing soon
kyoki no megami
maDAlexa
p.s. what happened to envy? i wonder...
p.p.s. btw you have some mistakes; for example you called lust envy in the scene of yuukis kidnapping, but nothing too grave
1Kyoki no Megamihaifisch;
could swear i've read this story before, but dunno if i reviewed...
anyways - interestng story, i think the unknown is the mysterious brother and hope you plan on continuing soon
kyoki no megami
maDAlexa
p.s. what happened to envy? i wonder...
p.p.s. btw you have some mistakes; for example you called lust envy in the scene of yuukis kidnapping, but nothing too grave
9/9/2012 c16 EnjoyEveryChapter
I feel like...
You're going to kill everyone -.- Or someone important. & i'll cry. Seriously. Is the wound Aidou caused reaaaaally harmful? Or will she pull through? grdgreggdg. Anyways, I hope Envy & Takuma make up... More so, Shiki & Sora should make up...
This is probably my favorite Shiki/OC so far, so UPDATE SOON. Please. ;D
I feel like...
You're going to kill everyone -.- Or someone important. & i'll cry. Seriously. Is the wound Aidou caused reaaaaally harmful? Or will she pull through? grdgreggdg. Anyways, I hope Envy & Takuma make up... More so, Shiki & Sora should make up...
This is probably my favorite Shiki/OC so far, so UPDATE SOON. Please. ;D
8/2/2012 c16 I Tell the Truth
Reread your chapter, there's a couple little mistakes here and there. There was a part where you said "of cause" instead of "of course" (something like that), and there were some grammar mistakes here and there.
I love the second to last line. And I like how you make the readers curious on who "he" is. I like how the chapter ended overall, with "him".
You can't make your own character OOC because it's your character and you can chose how to write up the character yourself.
Good chapter, overall. I think you'll reach your goal of 100 reviews; only one more is needed, it seems.
Reread your chapter, there's a couple little mistakes here and there. There was a part where you said "of cause" instead of "of course" (something like that), and there were some grammar mistakes here and there.
I love the second to last line. And I like how you make the readers curious on who "he" is. I like how the chapter ended overall, with "him".
You can't make your own character OOC because it's your character and you can chose how to write up the character yourself.
Good chapter, overall. I think you'll reach your goal of 100 reviews; only one more is needed, it seems.