for The Enchantment of the Mermaid Whisperers5/23/2012 c22 
21The Queen of Valencia Torgue
I think I may like narator (I didn't spell that right) better. Either way works ewll though. Sorry I didn't comment sooner. Nice chapter!
21The Queen of Valencia TorgueI think I may like narator (I didn't spell that right) better. Either way works ewll though. Sorry I didn't comment sooner. Nice chapter!
5/15/2012 c1 Lia
Update. Update. Update. Update. Please please please please PLEASE finish the story! I beg you!
Update. Update. Update. Update. Please please please please PLEASE finish the story! I beg you!
5/4/2012 c22 Avalon Dwight
OMG!
THAT WAS SO GOOD! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE SUPER QUICKLY!
OMG!
THAT WAS SO GOOD! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE SUPER QUICKLY!
4/24/2012 c22 Kaloopi
Great Story! Keep writing, please! I love how... human you make everybody! Cuz after all, we're all human, even when we're not ;)! Great story, update soon!
Great Story! Keep writing, please! I love how... human you make everybody! Cuz after all, we're all human, even when we're not ;)! Great story, update soon!
4/18/2012 c21 Guest
PLEASE UPDATE!
PLEASE UPDATE!
3/26/2012 c21 The Queen of Valencia Torgue
Cool! THe only thing I'm a little confused about are now many characters there are getting to be, it's sometimes hard to keep them all straight. But other then that, good chapter!
Cool! THe only thing I'm a little confused about are now many characters there are getting to be, it's sometimes hard to keep them all straight. But other then that, good chapter!
3/18/2012 c17 Lauren
Wait, wait, Seth has been missing for six months and no one is worried about him?
Wait, wait, Seth has been missing for six months and no one is worried about him?
3/18/2012 c16 Lauren
Now that you mention it, I am craving brownies. :) And I was confused about this chapter. What was happening in it? Maybe I just didn't read carefully enought...?
Now that you mention it, I am craving brownies. :) And I was confused about this chapter. What was happening in it? Maybe I just didn't read carefully enought...?
3/18/2012 c14 Lauren
Wow, that was so good, even though I've always liked Seth better. :) What did the one plus one equals trampoline thing mean, though? And, by the way, you misspelled handsome.
Wow, that was so good, even though I've always liked Seth better. :) What did the one plus one equals trampoline thing mean, though? And, by the way, you misspelled handsome.
3/18/2012 c11 Lauren
I really like your story, but Hermia really makes me mad. She's like this controlling stalker girl. :P Anyway, thanks so much for writing this!
I really like your story, but Hermia really makes me mad. She's like this controlling stalker girl. :P Anyway, thanks so much for writing this!
3/16/2012 c21 FanofKendra98
I read all the chapters and are great! Are you going to write chapter 22? Please do it!
I read all the chapters and are great! Are you going to write chapter 22? Please do it!
3/11/2012 c21 16hayhay16
Am I the only one making the connection between Jake Sully and Seth ? The exact same thing happened to both of them. They were turned into a different species and told to gain their trust. They fell in love and were rejected when they told the truth. Did you do that on purpose? I sure seems like it.
Am I the only one making the connection between Jake Sully and Seth ? The exact same thing happened to both of them. They were turned into a different species and told to gain their trust. They fell in love and were rejected when they told the truth. Did you do that on purpose? I sure seems like it.
2/4/2012 c14 2FanGirl98578
Haha i love it...my only worry is... What will Bracken think of this? ;D good job
2FanGirl98578Haha i love it...my only worry is... What will Bracken think of this? ;D good job