for Love and sacrifice1/30/2005 c7 ulove3
Come on Please Please Please continue. This has got to be one of the best stories I have read. It has been a while since you have updated I don't know the reason for you being gone so long I just hope you return to finish this fanfic because I can't wait to read more. I want to see what happens. Please continue.
Come on Please Please Please continue. This has got to be one of the best stories I have read. It has been a while since you have updated I don't know the reason for you being gone so long I just hope you return to finish this fanfic because I can't wait to read more. I want to see what happens. Please continue.
1/22/2005 c1 
5Son Christine
This is Son Christine. In response to your review, I'm really glad that you were honest and I appreciate your critisism. I realize that my writing wasn't fully developed when I was 13 (which was when I began writing it) Nonetheless, I believe that I have come a long way since then, three years later. This is probably why my style is a bit different toward the later chapters.
But if you don't feel like reading it, or if you don't think you can make it, then hey, up to you. Writing can only improve through the years. Take care, god bless
~Son Christine~
5Son ChristineThis is Son Christine. In response to your review, I'm really glad that you were honest and I appreciate your critisism. I realize that my writing wasn't fully developed when I was 13 (which was when I began writing it) Nonetheless, I believe that I have come a long way since then, three years later. This is probably why my style is a bit different toward the later chapters.
But if you don't feel like reading it, or if you don't think you can make it, then hey, up to you. Writing can only improve through the years. Take care, god bless
~Son Christine~
5/22/2004 c5 dreams
Is it just me or are writers these days attach to the idea of describing people's clothes and beauty? Evil queen? Furious evil queen? O my God. No offense but your writing like a child and this is the rated R section. Maybe you should write PG things first because that's where your level of writing is right now. Okay to put it short and bluntly. Your story is child's play. I feel like a little having a my babysitter tell me a story about Beauty and the Beast or something.
Is it just me or are writers these days attach to the idea of describing people's clothes and beauty? Evil queen? Furious evil queen? O my God. No offense but your writing like a child and this is the rated R section. Maybe you should write PG things first because that's where your level of writing is right now. Okay to put it short and bluntly. Your story is child's play. I feel like a little having a my babysitter tell me a story about Beauty and the Beast or something.
7/16/2002 c7 samsonite didn't sign in
Hey thank you for emailing me and telling me about the story. this chapter was great! keep up the good work.
Hey thank you for emailing me and telling me about the story. this chapter was great! keep up the good work.
7/16/2002 c8 4BlazeofthePhoenix
Hey, thanks for reviewing my story. You're is pretty good too. Keep writing!
-Blaze of the Phoenix-
~bgirl protox~
4BlazeofthePhoenixHey, thanks for reviewing my story. You're is pretty good too. Keep writing!
-Blaze of the Phoenix-
~bgirl protox~
6/1/2002 c7 3Volcana
OMG this was so gool! I totally love da story, especially the fact that you made them go to Puerto Rico (said the proud Puertorican) It's is so cool!Keep it up!
3VolcanaOMG this was so gool! I totally love da story, especially the fact that you made them go to Puerto Rico (said the proud Puertorican) It's is so cool!Keep it up!
5/29/2002 c7 7Moonchild2
That's a really good story! There is only one prob w/ it...it needs finished! So keep up the good work and upload the next chapter soon! PLEASE!
7Moonchild2That's a really good story! There is only one prob w/ it...it needs finished! So keep up the good work and upload the next chapter soon! PLEASE!
5/25/2002 c7 4zSah
Hi! I've read all seven chapters. The storyline's great. It gives equal importance to each senshi and her respective love life. However, I do see the impending fireworks of the Usagi-Mamoru affair. Keep it up.
4zSahHi! I've read all seven chapters. The storyline's great. It gives equal importance to each senshi and her respective love life. However, I do see the impending fireworks of the Usagi-Mamoru affair. Keep it up.
5/17/2002 c1 3Marti Thatcher
Great story! Continue please!
Just to clarify - "The Frat Party" was uploaded before but it was before ff.net got revamped and it was a looooooooooooong time ago. I decided to upload it again cause I might continue with the story - hopefully -_-;; - and besides I got so many more reviews this time! ^_^
3Marti ThatcherGreat story! Continue please!
Just to clarify - "The Frat Party" was uploaded before but it was before ff.net got revamped and it was a looooooooooooong time ago. I decided to upload it again cause I might continue with the story - hopefully -_-;; - and besides I got so many more reviews this time! ^_^