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for Triology of Rebirth The Book of Profecies

12/30/2010 c2 dale89
i liked original anyway but this is okay.

Maybe you should try to include more descriptive paragraphs instead of just all speech.
12/29/2010 c1 9Lord Pata
Really interesting start, it flows really better ^^

Keep it up, I'm really looking forward to this ^^

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