for Love bound Idiots8/14/2013 c6 Guest
This is adorable, you really should continue
This is adorable, you really should continue
2/27/2013 c6 
3cowsaremyfriends42
Are you ever going to update? If this was discontinued feel free to call me a Baka.
3cowsaremyfriends42Are you ever going to update? If this was discontinued feel free to call me a Baka.
9/23/2012 c6 5Shunkaida ByaSaJu Yukish
Hehehe I was starting to wonder where Sakura had got to lol but pills?! Awesome idea! Reckon I need some (rubs hands together evilly)
5Shunkaida ByaSaJu YukishHehehe I was starting to wonder where Sakura had got to lol but pills?! Awesome idea! Reckon I need some (rubs hands together evilly)
8/18/2011 c2 3xxSweet Memory
Wow chapter 1 and 2 are much better!
Now matter how many times I read it, it still makes me laugh my head off when I read what mokona and yuko did xD
oh and fai's last name is flourite
king ashura made the last name up using that stone
at least I hope his name was ashura... It's been so long since i read tsubasa "
3xxSweet MemoryWow chapter 1 and 2 are much better!
Now matter how many times I read it, it still makes me laugh my head off when I read what mokona and yuko did xD
oh and fai's last name is flourite
king ashura made the last name up using that stone
at least I hope his name was ashura... It's been so long since i read tsubasa "
7/17/2011 c4 6comet77
Heh, I loved the Kyoya maybe knowing their sized comment. It made me smile ^^
NOW FOR CRITIQUE~~~
Pair, not pare.
Your grammar is still pretty bad my dear...your tenses are atill all over the place. PLEASE GET A BETA
I just lurve this! But one question; How can they be looking for Sakura's feather when she appears to be nonexistant? O.o
Update soooooooon
6comet77Heh, I loved the Kyoya maybe knowing their sized comment. It made me smile ^^
NOW FOR CRITIQUE~~~
Pair, not pare.
Your grammar is still pretty bad my dear...your tenses are atill all over the place. PLEASE GET A BETA
I just lurve this! But one question; How can they be looking for Sakura's feather when she appears to be nonexistant? O.o
Update soooooooon
7/17/2011 c2 comet77
Okiiiiiez more critique time~ (Since that is indeed the whole purpose of the standard review)
Mokona has 108 secret techniques, not 150.
Honestly, since Honey is considered a human weapon to the higher ups in that world, I do think that Honey would AT LEAST put up a good fight with our dear Kuro-poo.
It's staring, not starring. Only one r deary.
I think the Host Club should be a little more hostile towards these strangers who have spent the night in their club room in their school. They seem super out of character and WAY to...accomodating. xDD
Update soooooooon~
Okiiiiiez more critique time~ (Since that is indeed the whole purpose of the standard review)
Mokona has 108 secret techniques, not 150.
Honestly, since Honey is considered a human weapon to the higher ups in that world, I do think that Honey would AT LEAST put up a good fight with our dear Kuro-poo.
It's staring, not starring. Only one r deary.
I think the Host Club should be a little more hostile towards these strangers who have spent the night in their club room in their school. They seem super out of character and WAY to...accomodating. xDD
Update soooooooon~
7/16/2011 c1 comet77
Alright, I'm gonna give you some serious critique here, so if you don't eant it, don't read it m'kay?
First off, Mokona is spelled with two o's, not an e, and it is referred to always as just an "it".
Where the heck is Sakura?
You are switching back and forth between past tense and present tense. YOU MUST CHOSE ONE TENSE. XD
Always finish your sentences with the correct punctuation, whether it be a period or quotation marks. This may just be a simple fanfiction, but regardless they are very important.
Because of all these grammar mistakes my dear, I highly recommend a BETA. This story is just too good for it to be ruined with bad grammar mah friend. ;D
Please update soon yo!
Alright, I'm gonna give you some serious critique here, so if you don't eant it, don't read it m'kay?
First off, Mokona is spelled with two o's, not an e, and it is referred to always as just an "it".
Where the heck is Sakura?
You are switching back and forth between past tense and present tense. YOU MUST CHOSE ONE TENSE. XD
Always finish your sentences with the correct punctuation, whether it be a period or quotation marks. This may just be a simple fanfiction, but regardless they are very important.
Because of all these grammar mistakes my dear, I highly recommend a BETA. This story is just too good for it to be ruined with bad grammar mah friend. ;D
Please update soon yo!
6/30/2011 c4 Lazy Kitty Hyuu
hyuu! this might be the best Tsubasa/OHSHC crossover i've seen. I've been wanting to read one for a while where Tamaki and Fai are all buddy buddy cause of how alike they are and Kuro-kun getting all jealous cause Fai's not spending as much time annoying him as usual. lol I hope you update soon I'll be sure to read and comment!
hyuu! this might be the best Tsubasa/OHSHC crossover i've seen. I've been wanting to read one for a while where Tamaki and Fai are all buddy buddy cause of how alike they are and Kuro-kun getting all jealous cause Fai's not spending as much time annoying him as usual. lol I hope you update soon I'll be sure to read and comment!
6/12/2011 c4 TheGoth24
I usually don't really like cross-over stories, but you got me hooked on this one :) Hope next chapter will be up soon :)
I usually don't really like cross-over stories, but you got me hooked on this one :) Hope next chapter will be up soon :)
5/22/2011 c4 3xxSweet Memory
Yay you updated ^^
I agree, you have gotten better at writing
one request, put in more tamakixharuhi
it makes everything funnier when Tamaki starts yelling at people for getting to close to his little girl xD
3xxSweet MemoryYay you updated ^^
I agree, you have gotten better at writing
one request, put in more tamakixharuhi
it makes everything funnier when Tamaki starts yelling at people for getting to close to his little girl xD
5/17/2011 c3 xxSweet Memory
LOL! That was one of the crackiest love scenes/pranks I've ever seen! xDDDD
I nearly fell offthe bed because I was laughing so hard, plus I was facepalming a lot so my forehead hurts... Lol
I hope you start writing more for this… I really enjoyed it
oh and Kurogane also likes to call Mokona 'white manju bun'
and Mokona doesn't actually have a gender
Mokona is Mokona ^^
LOL! That was one of the crackiest love scenes/pranks I've ever seen! xDDDD
I nearly fell offthe bed because I was laughing so hard, plus I was facepalming a lot so my forehead hurts... Lol
I hope you start writing more for this… I really enjoyed it
oh and Kurogane also likes to call Mokona 'white manju bun'
and Mokona doesn't actually have a gender
Mokona is Mokona ^^