for Family12/30/2010 c1 HooglaBoogla
Erm... what do I say? Weeeelllll... It kinda... okay, it feels like a crack fic, and possibly a parody, considering how you wrote the dialouges. Is this supposed to be a serious fic? Cause you really need to work on that.
And 7! OMG! It really seems Minato and Kushina are great in the sack, eh?*giggles perversely* I dunno.. I lauged my ass off on that RN part in the beggining. Hilarious! And the blah blah too. And the Shinigami? The Best part!
Maaaayyybeee you should turn this into a purely crak fic? 'Cause I'm lovin' it!
Erm... what do I say? Weeeelllll... It kinda... okay, it feels like a crack fic, and possibly a parody, considering how you wrote the dialouges. Is this supposed to be a serious fic? Cause you really need to work on that.
And 7! OMG! It really seems Minato and Kushina are great in the sack, eh?*giggles perversely* I dunno.. I lauged my ass off on that RN part in the beggining. Hilarious! And the blah blah too. And the Shinigami? The Best part!
Maaaayyybeee you should turn this into a purely crak fic? 'Cause I'm lovin' it!