for Why Me1/2/2011 c1 Nileywriter101
That was amazing! I loved it. I know clearly understand your storyline. It was really Bice and I thin that the story has a lot of potential. I will be contiuing to read the story for sure. I will offer as much advice and tips as possible. Private Message me anytime and I'll try to help you if you get stuck or something! :)
That was amazing! I loved it. I know clearly understand your storyline. It was really Bice and I thin that the story has a lot of potential. I will be contiuing to read the story for sure. I will offer as much advice and tips as possible. Private Message me anytime and I'll try to help you if you get stuck or something! :)
12/30/2010 c1 
214special agent Ali
aw well now I understand your story but I have one error to point out you said she is Jennie Lucas but in this its Denise Jonas
In the show though the mom is Sandy Lucas and dad is Tom Lucas you may want to change Denise to Sandy because its not allowed to be JB but JONAS
anyway nice work I love the guys are comforting each other but poor Jennie
214special agent Aliaw well now I understand your story but I have one error to point out you said she is Jennie Lucas but in this its Denise Jonas
In the show though the mom is Sandy Lucas and dad is Tom Lucas you may want to change Denise to Sandy because its not allowed to be JB but JONAS
anyway nice work I love the guys are comforting each other but poor Jennie