for Loyalty1/2/2011 c1 
4Clumsy-shinigami-sama
FJKSIL! I am speechless! Gil and Break is my OTP but you made me love if even more! *RAWR*
4Clumsy-shinigami-samaFJKSIL! I am speechless! Gil and Break is my OTP but you made me love if even more! *RAWR*
1/2/2011 c1 12pinkhearter13
Nice! The way you wrote this story seemed to have a ton of meaning behind it. Comparing Break's eye to Oz's eyes, first off, was really interesting. Haven't noticed before, but now that I think about it, they would seem to have that same mischievous glint-though Oz brighter, and Break sinister. That sort of developed from an underlying theme to the major theme at the end. Really interesting. I liked how Break, angry at Gilbert for blaming his actions on someone else, was perfectly in character. That just struck out at me. Good job.
Keep writing!
~Pinkhearter13
12pinkhearter13Nice! The way you wrote this story seemed to have a ton of meaning behind it. Comparing Break's eye to Oz's eyes, first off, was really interesting. Haven't noticed before, but now that I think about it, they would seem to have that same mischievous glint-though Oz brighter, and Break sinister. That sort of developed from an underlying theme to the major theme at the end. Really interesting. I liked how Break, angry at Gilbert for blaming his actions on someone else, was perfectly in character. That just struck out at me. Good job.
Keep writing!
~Pinkhearter13