3/28/2011 c1 1Arm's Armed Arms
I've already guessed from the start that 'the hunter' would be Squall, but not until the end I realized what the title meant. (And as you said it yourself, it ended up pretty funny like most of your other fanfic XD)
Great job! Will be waiting for the next one! d^^b
I've already guessed from the start that 'the hunter' would be Squall, but not until the end I realized what the title meant. (And as you said it yourself, it ended up pretty funny like most of your other fanfic XD)
Great job! Will be waiting for the next one! d^^b
2/27/2011 c12 14Getemono
wow. That was a lot of information to put into three chapters, good job, my mind is very much blown.
wow. That was a lot of information to put into three chapters, good job, my mind is very much blown.
1/19/2011 c9 Getemono
I loved everything about this update. But dang, if I were smarter I would have read it a chapter every few days so the wait wouldn't seem so long. Oh well...
Anyways, loved that 'drunk orphanage gang' scene. If you do decide to make a one shot of that, I shall definitely read it. I like how you manage to sneak bits of humor throughout the story, even though it has a consistently dark tone. The expanded concept of sorceresses actually NEEDING their Knights is really cool, too.
And the regret that Irvine and Selphie feel when they see Squall...you've touched it in a unique way, most people don't bring up the guilt a good friend feels in those situations, they usually just focus on the tragedy of the romance gone wrong. Very refreshing.
Can't wait to see how what happened "fifteen years ago" affected Squall today. Good luck with that tricky chapter!
I loved everything about this update. But dang, if I were smarter I would have read it a chapter every few days so the wait wouldn't seem so long. Oh well...
Anyways, loved that 'drunk orphanage gang' scene. If you do decide to make a one shot of that, I shall definitely read it. I like how you manage to sneak bits of humor throughout the story, even though it has a consistently dark tone. The expanded concept of sorceresses actually NEEDING their Knights is really cool, too.
And the regret that Irvine and Selphie feel when they see Squall...you've touched it in a unique way, most people don't bring up the guilt a good friend feels in those situations, they usually just focus on the tragedy of the romance gone wrong. Very refreshing.
Can't wait to see how what happened "fifteen years ago" affected Squall today. Good luck with that tricky chapter!
1/8/2011 c6 Getemono
Wow, love how you built up the suspense in this chapter. I worry about "Squall" if that really is him. I find it hard to believe that this is your first long fic, it's all going so smoothly. I'm almost dreading to see what happens, but at the same time I can't wait to see how you craft it. Well done!
Wow, love how you built up the suspense in this chapter. I worry about "Squall" if that really is him. I find it hard to believe that this is your first long fic, it's all going so smoothly. I'm almost dreading to see what happens, but at the same time I can't wait to see how you craft it. Well done!
1/7/2011 c5 Getemono
Damn, the sixth chapter is taking its sweet time to show up, guess I'll have to wait 'til later in the day...
Aside from that, lovely story! It's rare to see a fic with Griever, and even rarer to see an older cast of FFVIII. I like the character development (love how Squall handled all of the situations. Very true to his personality), and can't wait to see just what Griever's up to.
Keep up the good work!
Damn, the sixth chapter is taking its sweet time to show up, guess I'll have to wait 'til later in the day...
Aside from that, lovely story! It's rare to see a fic with Griever, and even rarer to see an older cast of FFVIII. I like the character development (love how Squall handled all of the situations. Very true to his personality), and can't wait to see just what Griever's up to.
Keep up the good work!