for The Hat3/23/2013 c1 R.Leva
Nice one shot and very plausible. I enjoyed it!
Nice one shot and very plausible. I enjoyed it!
2/1/2011 c1 
17hippiechic
Okay, okay. I won’t fry you to a crisp for picking on Yamcha. Not that I’m happy about it, but because-...well, darn it! you wrote this so well. -_- As you stated, this is as good of an explanation as any to the break-up of Bulma and Yamcha.
You did an excellent job of getting Vegeta down pat. Great job. I especially enjoyed his thrill at the end. Lol.
You were also right about Goku. He’s so naive. He has such a hard time believing there are people out there who are just bad people.
Anyway, nice one-shot. I did enjoy this quick tidbit. I’ll be dropping in on your latest master piece when I get the chance. Peace and Out! ~mar
17hippiechicOkay, okay. I won’t fry you to a crisp for picking on Yamcha. Not that I’m happy about it, but because-...well, darn it! you wrote this so well. -_- As you stated, this is as good of an explanation as any to the break-up of Bulma and Yamcha.
You did an excellent job of getting Vegeta down pat. Great job. I especially enjoyed his thrill at the end. Lol.
You were also right about Goku. He’s so naive. He has such a hard time believing there are people out there who are just bad people.
Anyway, nice one-shot. I did enjoy this quick tidbit. I’ll be dropping in on your latest master piece when I get the chance. Peace and Out! ~mar
1/8/2011 c1 6Remembering childhood
Great oneshot !
I guess this would be possible, the shame + the "they would never believe me anyway" factor could indeed keep her quiet about Yamcha's abuse... it's sadly often like that in real life as well.
I laughed a lot at the idea of Vegeta at last being allowed to beat the shit out the weakling... mouahahaha !
Very nice fic. Keep it up !
6Remembering childhoodGreat oneshot !
I guess this would be possible, the shame + the "they would never believe me anyway" factor could indeed keep her quiet about Yamcha's abuse... it's sadly often like that in real life as well.
I laughed a lot at the idea of Vegeta at last being allowed to beat the shit out the weakling... mouahahaha !
Very nice fic. Keep it up !