
11/10/2017 c1 Essence
U should make a comic and the story.
U should make a comic and the story.
8/24/2013 c19 KAY
I LOVE THIS STORY YOU WROTE HERE BUT IM COFUSED WHAT IS ARIEL'S FORM KIARA?
I LOVE THIS STORY YOU WROTE HERE BUT IM COFUSED WHAT IS ARIEL'S FORM KIARA?
8/20/2013 c19
10Da-Wolf-Goddess
I love this story you have created, I think it's awesome, it's my new favourite story to read I have read 1,2, and 3 a few times. Jim and Ariel are my favourite Disney couple.

I love this story you have created, I think it's awesome, it's my new favourite story to read I have read 1,2, and 3 a few times. Jim and Ariel are my favourite Disney couple.
4/27/2013 c1 Kelly
You should use the song "If Today was Your Last Day" by Nickelback! That song could fit probably into the story.
You should use the song "If Today was Your Last Day" by Nickelback! That song could fit probably into the story.
9/15/2012 c19 Anonymus
I love the whole series of the curse of the lions, and i strongly think you should do the 4th one.
I love the whole series of the curse of the lions, and i strongly think you should do the 4th one.
2/4/2012 c1 Lady Lucky Heartfillia
Wonderful just amazing...oh I'm doing it again you have a talent you know it's wonderful and it appears that you're skills are also another asset to writing stories aswell as your creativity and imagination
Wonderful just amazing...oh I'm doing it again you have a talent you know it's wonderful and it appears that you're skills are also another asset to writing stories aswell as your creativity and imagination
5/17/2011 c19
8fantasylover4evr
yes! oh a million times yes on the 4th one! i wonder who ur gonna pick 4 jariel's offspring..

yes! oh a million times yes on the 4th one! i wonder who ur gonna pick 4 jariel's offspring..
5/15/2011 c19
1AJtheWeird
Yay! They're Mr. and Mrs. James Pleiades Hawkins! YAY! :)
I think a prequel would be cool

Yay! They're Mr. and Mrs. James Pleiades Hawkins! YAY! :)
I think a prequel would be cool