
5/7/2011 c17
29Aggressively Hospitable
Sorry I've been off the radar for a while, but holy crap girl! This is...just...awesomeness, I don't know how else to describe it. It has everything a great story should have. Sometimes you need bad times to appreciate the good times. Rock on sista!

Sorry I've been off the radar for a while, but holy crap girl! This is...just...awesomeness, I don't know how else to describe it. It has everything a great story should have. Sometimes you need bad times to appreciate the good times. Rock on sista!
4/29/2011 c16
8fantasylover4evr
im still this series number one fan! and i was wondering if u could use E.T. by katy perry or I Wouldn't Be A Man by josh turner anytime soon. thanks

im still this series number one fan! and i was wondering if u could use E.T. by katy perry or I Wouldn't Be A Man by josh turner anytime soon. thanks
4/27/2011 c15
1AJtheWeird
more please :D
oh! and if you could incorporate Jodi Benson's "One Dance" (a deleted song from the Little Mermaid) or Celine Dion's "My Heart Will Go On" you'd make my day brighter than a bowl full of cherries :)

more please :D
oh! and if you could incorporate Jodi Benson's "One Dance" (a deleted song from the Little Mermaid) or Celine Dion's "My Heart Will Go On" you'd make my day brighter than a bowl full of cherries :)
4/17/2011 c14 LoveLifeAlways90
I love it. each chapter keep getting better and better. there was not to little or to much description. It was just rite. update soon please.
I love it. each chapter keep getting better and better. there was not to little or to much description. It was just rite. update soon please.
3/25/2011 c11 branwen09
OmG. Ariel's gonna bloom, but some moron's are trying to use a lion as bait. (Clayton, Geston) lol the next chap. should be great. Keep it up.
OmG. Ariel's gonna bloom, but some moron's are trying to use a lion as bait. (Clayton, Geston) lol the next chap. should be great. Keep it up.
3/12/2011 c9 Aggressively Hospitable
Wow, this chapter was really good, how you keep all of these characters strait is nothing short of astonishing. Keep up the great writing.
Wow, this chapter was really good, how you keep all of these characters strait is nothing short of astonishing. Keep up the great writing.
2/26/2011 c7 LoveLifeAlways90
I cant believe I missed so much. This is so much EPIC! I am loving the fact that Jim wishes to no about Ariel's past and all. Please can you do the song "I Need a girl by Tae Yang". But I must warn you that it is in another language but it have some english in it but if not then I understand. Please continu please.
I cant believe I missed so much. This is so much EPIC! I am loving the fact that Jim wishes to no about Ariel's past and all. Please can you do the song "I Need a girl by Tae Yang". But I must warn you that it is in another language but it have some english in it but if not then I understand. Please continu please.
2/26/2011 c5
2SolrSurfr3
Hmm. I could've sworn J.S. would end up being Jack Sparrow. Eh, I was close. XD

Hmm. I could've sworn J.S. would end up being Jack Sparrow. Eh, I was close. XD