for Just the Beginning1/22/2011 c7 Clueslover7
Natalie plays video games? Didn't see that one coming, but I think Natalie/Dan are a cute couple. Like a completely AWESOME couple! Interesting chapter. What were Fiske and Alexa talking about? Cliffie!
At first I wasn't sure about this story because I don't really like stories with OC, but I actually really like it:)
Keep writing and update ASAP!
~Clueslover7
P.S. You spelt beginning wrong in the title of your story. See how I spelt it? That's the right way.
Natalie plays video games? Didn't see that one coming, but I think Natalie/Dan are a cute couple. Like a completely AWESOME couple! Interesting chapter. What were Fiske and Alexa talking about? Cliffie!
At first I wasn't sure about this story because I don't really like stories with OC, but I actually really like it:)
Keep writing and update ASAP!
~Clueslover7
P.S. You spelt beginning wrong in the title of your story. See how I spelt it? That's the right way.
1/21/2011 c7 SilverSoulMoon
LOVE IT(jumps up and down)! O.K keep up the awsome work and I hope you completly finish this story! Hope you add more Ian and Amy! Seanora, tootals, and all the good stuff! ..
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LOVE IT(jumps up and down)! O.K keep up the awsome work and I hope you completly finish this story! Hope you add more Ian and Amy! Seanora, tootals, and all the good stuff! ..
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1/20/2011 c7 pomzlovv
Luvv it
Luvv it
1/20/2011 c7 DrippingRubies
that was good what was alexa talking about i cant wait for the next chapter update soon
that was good what was alexa talking about i cant wait for the next chapter update soon
1/20/2011 c6 
21bookgirl39
Yeah I agree with Natalie, since when is he hers? Sorry... I'm not into the Dan/Natalie stuff... but I did like the chapters :) I especialy liked James and how much he and Ian are alike!
21bookgirl39Yeah I agree with Natalie, since when is he hers? Sorry... I'm not into the Dan/Natalie stuff... but I did like the chapters :) I especialy liked James and how much he and Ian are alike!
1/19/2011 c5 SilverSoulMoon
I LOVE YOUR STORY SO FAR! Keep up the good work and I hope to see an addition to the story soon. I hope you count my rewiew as 100 so you would write more. Tootals,Seanora and all the good things.:)
I LOVE YOUR STORY SO FAR! Keep up the good work and I hope to see an addition to the story soon. I hope you count my rewiew as 100 so you would write more. Tootals,Seanora and all the good things.:)
1/18/2011 c5 40mellamaet
Hey, this is a great story, and it would be a shame to discontinue it just because not a lot of people have reviewed. You can't expect to have a lot of reviews with only 3 chapters up. You have to be patient because some readers would simply review your story when they've finished it.
you know, some people, would even call you a "review whore" with what you're doing. Just saying
otherwise, its a good story :)
40mellamaetHey, this is a great story, and it would be a shame to discontinue it just because not a lot of people have reviewed. You can't expect to have a lot of reviews with only 3 chapters up. You have to be patient because some readers would simply review your story when they've finished it.
you know, some people, would even call you a "review whore" with what you're doing. Just saying
otherwise, its a good story :)
1/17/2011 c5 21bookgirl39
I loved chapter 4! One of the best Amy/Ian moments i ever read! PLEASE keep writing!
21bookgirl39I loved chapter 4! One of the best Amy/Ian moments i ever read! PLEASE keep writing!
1/17/2011 c5 lovely1227
i love this storie plz plz plz plz plzplz plz plz plz plz plz plz keep writing
Quote to amy someone on here said this i forgot who though
"your never trapped by darkness your only hiding from light
i love this storie plz plz plz plz plzplz plz plz plz plz plz plz keep writing
Quote to amy someone on here said this i forgot who though
"your never trapped by darkness your only hiding from light
1/17/2011 c4 jonahh8ter
Just red ur story do not stop!
Just red ur story do not stop!
1/17/2011 c4 pomzlovv
No don't sop or feel disscouraged also I would like to c me appear in ur next chp
No don't sop or feel disscouraged also I would like to c me appear in ur next chp