for The Long Road Home4/30 c171 Guest
An amazing story! Thank you! Cerelean
An amazing story! Thank you! Cerelean
3/15 c171 rexcoquis
So happy to see you post something new to this story, and even more excited at the "for now". Here's to more!
So happy to see you post something new to this story, and even more excited at the "for now". Here's to more!
3/14 c171 StarshineHair
It's thanks to you posting again that I found this story, so thank you!
It was so wonderfully done, I've been binge reading it for days. I've loved it and all your characters. You really made everyone feel real, and the story was so well done that I could see it as canon.
I hope you keep writing!
It's thanks to you posting again that I found this story, so thank you!
It was so wonderfully done, I've been binge reading it for days. I've loved it and all your characters. You really made everyone feel real, and the story was so well done that I could see it as canon.
I hope you keep writing!
3/12 c128 Guest
I knew it was coming, dreading it to be honest. Poor Malachi.
I knew it was coming, dreading it to be honest. Poor Malachi.
3/12 c112 StarshineHair
God I miss Sirius. You're portrayal of him was so well done, here I am still missing him all these chapters later.
I'm glad Harry is getting a breather from his mom, teens emotions are all over the place to start, so all of this has had to of felt awful for him. I hope one day he will understand and make peace with it, but right now I feel like he is justified in how upset he is.
Great chapter as always!
God I miss Sirius. You're portrayal of him was so well done, here I am still missing him all these chapters later.
I'm glad Harry is getting a breather from his mom, teens emotions are all over the place to start, so all of this has had to of felt awful for him. I hope one day he will understand and make peace with it, but right now I feel like he is justified in how upset he is.
Great chapter as always!
3/3 c68 StarshineHair
Losing Sirius all over again is such a gut punch. I knew it was probably coming since he kept putting so much stock in the future, but it still hurts.
Losing Sirius all over again is such a gut punch. I knew it was probably coming since he kept putting so much stock in the future, but it still hurts.
3/1 c171 BgIta
congratulations from Bergamo Italy! a great story with a great plot and fantastic characterisation of the different characters, epeciallally Piton and Regulus
congratulations from Bergamo Italy! a great story with a great plot and fantastic characterisation of the different characters, epeciallally Piton and Regulus
2/28 c1 zaniarein247
Your story "The Long Road Home" is more than just words, it’s a masterpiece waiting to be seen!
With its rich world, compelling characters, and gripping plot, your narrative deserves to be brought to life visually.
As a commissioned base artist with 4 years of experience, I specialize in transforming stories into stunning comics that captivate and inspire. Let’s work together to turn your vision into breathtaking art that speaks to the world!
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Let’s create something unforgettable! I can’t wait to bring your story to life.
Your story "The Long Road Home" is more than just words, it’s a masterpiece waiting to be seen!
With its rich world, compelling characters, and gripping plot, your narrative deserves to be brought to life visually.
As a commissioned base artist with 4 years of experience, I specialize in transforming stories into stunning comics that captivate and inspire. Let’s work together to turn your vision into breathtaking art that speaks to the world!
Want to see my work? Just ask!
Discord: alimaggoon
Let’s create something unforgettable! I can’t wait to bring your story to life.
2/23 c171 
4Liv Stoker
I’m glad I’m not the only orphan of this beautiful story. I confess that I always visit your profile to see if, in some way, you will continue writing this world, especially about how these families lived after the war. Your story is memorable, and I hope you keep writing.
4Liv StokerI’m glad I’m not the only orphan of this beautiful story. I confess that I always visit your profile to see if, in some way, you will continue writing this world, especially about how these families lived after the war. Your story is memorable, and I hope you keep writing.
2/5 c6 Guest
Wow what a detestable human being this lily is. Self absorbed and uncaring for the fealings of people around her.
Wow what a detestable human being this lily is. Self absorbed and uncaring for the fealings of people around her.
2/4 c171 1Mollyweasleyrocks
I was surprised and happy to see this update. And Snape and Lily twins! Those two have to do everything the hard way, lol. Of course Grace is a Slytherin, people knew that even when they didn't know who her father was. But loved this!
1MollyweasleyrocksI was surprised and happy to see this update. And Snape and Lily twins! Those two have to do everything the hard way, lol. Of course Grace is a Slytherin, people knew that even when they didn't know who her father was. But loved this!
1/30 c171 Alex
Nice wrap up for most of them. Of course, 80% of the Harry section was about Grace, and most of the others had to have her at some point. After all, she is the most important child in the family by a very wide margin.
I was half-afraid you would have some sort of cr*p where Snape and Harry bonded, but I should have known that you would never give Harry that sort of importance in that family, especially from a man who won't even let Harry address him more familiarly than 'sir' or 'professor' despite calling himself Harry's 'father'. I am glad that they are not close, though. Snape doesn't deserve it after being an awful, abusive bastard to Harry for so long. TBH, Lily doesn't deserve him either given her tacit approval of him abusing Harry.
Nice wrap up for most of them. Of course, 80% of the Harry section was about Grace, and most of the others had to have her at some point. After all, she is the most important child in the family by a very wide margin.
I was half-afraid you would have some sort of cr*p where Snape and Harry bonded, but I should have known that you would never give Harry that sort of importance in that family, especially from a man who won't even let Harry address him more familiarly than 'sir' or 'professor' despite calling himself Harry's 'father'. I am glad that they are not close, though. Snape doesn't deserve it after being an awful, abusive bastard to Harry for so long. TBH, Lily doesn't deserve him either given her tacit approval of him abusing Harry.
1/29 c171 7RedHood001
I literally did a double-take when I read the email notification. This was such a pleasant surprise!
I definitely love how it showed the characters years after the ending. However, it seems to be implied that Malachi and Luna went their separate ways, which made me way sadder than I thought it would. On the bright side, it seems Severus and Lily are going to have another child.
It would be interesting to imagine Grace as the older sibling now, and speaking of which, it was a treat to see her older entering Hogwarts. She's not wrong to believe there are expectations and baggage, considering her brother and father. I think it's on par or even above that of Harry and Malachi when they started.
Draco's choice of career was definitely interesting, considering how much of his life has changed in this story. There are still some of that Pureblood mindset, which I took as well-intentioned because he wants his cousins to do well in the Magical World. Lacking knowledge would understandably put them at a disadvantage, true.
As for Harry... I'm rooting for him! LET'S GOOOO!
Man, this was such a brilliant surprise. I know I said that already but it really was such an amazing feeling to know there was more to read. Regardless of how this was an epilogue, you made my day. Thank you for that!
7RedHood001I literally did a double-take when I read the email notification. This was such a pleasant surprise!
I definitely love how it showed the characters years after the ending. However, it seems to be implied that Malachi and Luna went their separate ways, which made me way sadder than I thought it would. On the bright side, it seems Severus and Lily are going to have another child.
It would be interesting to imagine Grace as the older sibling now, and speaking of which, it was a treat to see her older entering Hogwarts. She's not wrong to believe there are expectations and baggage, considering her brother and father. I think it's on par or even above that of Harry and Malachi when they started.
Draco's choice of career was definitely interesting, considering how much of his life has changed in this story. There are still some of that Pureblood mindset, which I took as well-intentioned because he wants his cousins to do well in the Magical World. Lacking knowledge would understandably put them at a disadvantage, true.
As for Harry... I'm rooting for him! LET'S GOOOO!
Man, this was such a brilliant surprise. I know I said that already but it really was such an amazing feeling to know there was more to read. Regardless of how this was an epilogue, you made my day. Thank you for that!
1/29 c97 Onomil
Thank you so much. I've been locked out my own account for a while now, but I've just managed to log back.
It's been far too many years since I've read your story as I had foolishly lost it somehow ..
I'm currently on chapter 97 - it's been the joy of my life these past weeks
(Potter's failed attempt at getting Snape's attention - Black staying for the night - Dear me!, and Malachi's future - the suspense!)
I realised that you had just upload an epilogue today. Thank you, again
Your story has been with me the entire time
Thank you so much. I've been locked out my own account for a while now, but I've just managed to log back.
It's been far too many years since I've read your story as I had foolishly lost it somehow ..
I'm currently on chapter 97 - it's been the joy of my life these past weeks
(Potter's failed attempt at getting Snape's attention - Black staying for the night - Dear me!, and Malachi's future - the suspense!)
I realised that you had just upload an epilogue today. Thank you, again
Your story has been with me the entire time