for This is not my Butler!4/3/2019 c3 EnderJess
I really don't know what Beyond said to make bard so uncomfortable, but I cant wait for the next chapter!
I really don't know what Beyond said to make bard so uncomfortable, but I cant wait for the next chapter!
6/26/2018 c3 Guest
Please update
Please update
2/27/2016 c3 IrokoZ
I agree with the last review! And the pink hat is called a bonnet, I think. This stort is so original to me, are there more like it? That'd be amazing! :D
I agree with the last review! And the pink hat is called a bonnet, I think. This stort is so original to me, are there more like it? That'd be amazing! :D
3/16/2015 c3 
60AzTec999
Compliments my dear novelist, you have now gained my interest and like. Please do continue with this interesting narrative account—
-okay, okay enough with my pseudo-formal British (it really creeps me out XD ) seriously dude, you need to update this thing. i could see a great potential for your story. it's been like more than 2 years?! O_o where are you?
60AzTec999Compliments my dear novelist, you have now gained my interest and like. Please do continue with this interesting narrative account—
-okay, okay enough with my pseudo-formal British (it really creeps me out XD ) seriously dude, you need to update this thing. i could see a great potential for your story. it's been like more than 2 years?! O_o where are you?
2/7/2014 c3 2Karen-Sama
woah so cool haha mm if i had to guess um... feed elizabeth bard's horrible cooking well ja ne
2Karen-Samawoah so cool haha mm if i had to guess um... feed elizabeth bard's horrible cooking well ja ne
11/10/2012 c3 Dark Kitty
Please write more.
Please write more.
10/27/2012 c3 Fan xD
these are pretty awesome! what im thinking is that Beyond told him to kill lizzie btw /fail/
anyways good job!
these are pretty awesome! what im thinking is that Beyond told him to kill lizzie btw /fail/
anyways good job!
10/5/2012 c3 12Nullan
Lets see Oh! i know he asked Brad to poison Lizzys food. Right! am i right? Grrrrrr i hate to guess Poste the next chapter soon PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEZZZ
12NullanLets see Oh! i know he asked Brad to poison Lizzys food. Right! am i right? Grrrrrr i hate to guess Poste the next chapter soon PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEZZZ
10/5/2012 c1 Nullan
EEEEEEEEEEEK Beyond taking Sabastions place! iTs just to much for me to handle *Faints*
EEEEEEEEEEEK Beyond taking Sabastions place! iTs just to much for me to handle *Faints*
6/4/2012 c3 Dark little kitty
I Love BB. He's awesome. I bet'cha he wants Elizabeth dead for putting that pink monstrosity on his head.
I Love BB. He's awesome. I bet'cha he wants Elizabeth dead for putting that pink monstrosity on his head.
11/11/2011 c3 MinnieXplayer
Not bad! Although I think you maybe could have emphasized on BB's puzzlement at the beginning and perhaps described the facial and body expressions a little more throughout the whole thing.
But it's a good story! Good bases, GOOD GRAMMAR (I love you already ;D), good spelling. Keep it up!
Not bad! Although I think you maybe could have emphasized on BB's puzzlement at the beginning and perhaps described the facial and body expressions a little more throughout the whole thing.
But it's a good story! Good bases, GOOD GRAMMAR (I love you already ;D), good spelling. Keep it up!