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9/20/2013 c1 116Chica Plutonio
Awwww what a beautiful end! I love it, was funny and romantic :3
8/19/2013 c1 Guest
Aw, so cute! :) Every one was pretty much in character, and it was great writing. Great job! :)
9/26/2012 c1 MrsN
Great!
Fits perfectly ;)
5/30/2012 c1 62prettyinpinkgal
What a charming story! I absolutely adore it. And Howl's note was the highlight. Thank you for delighting us with this!
5/13/2012 c1 3transpinestwins
That was wonderful! I especially loved Howl's note, and Michel made me laugh :D.
11/21/2011 c1 36Auna
I liked this! It's cute and it made me smile. :)
6/22/2011 c1 20theredrobin
That was very sweet. My face split into such a huge grin when I realized poor Michael had been turned out along with the rest.
1/23/2011 c1 2Shojo-Chan
That was sweet! I Loved it:)
1/10/2011 c1 Tg123455
Absolutely adorable! You captured Howl and Sophie to perfection- I loved how easily Howl rectified the issue of too many people within his castle. It's a wonder no other fanfic author thought of it before (I am delighted that you did).

I must read more of your work as I thoroughly enjoyed this piece.
1/10/2011 c1 1ANessa Kedavra
Ahhhh! This made me so happy you don't even understand. Bahaha I wish I had red gold hair! Very well done. Very close to the author's own style, in fact. Props!
1/7/2011 c1 22Frogster
That was cute! A delightful additional ending. Liked how Michael wanted to hug Sophie but was cut off by Howl. :D And how Sophie said Howl can't be trusted...and all the little fluff moments between our favorite couple.
1/7/2011 c1 1Caoimhe McQuarry
Very cute! It's actually been a while since I read the books so don't take my word on it, but I think you got everybody pretty much just about right here, and the writing is really nice! There was one minor thing which made me trip up:

"I'm the former heartless Howl"

Should be "formerly". Only thing which bothered me =P Overall, though, great to read =] I loved the "good book", made me giggle xD
1/3/2011 c1 1Dopeamine
That was adorable! :3 Howl's note made me laugh, along with pretty much all of Michael's lines XD Awesome job! :DD

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