for Tudor London6/16/2012 c11 
1Molliee
Oh lord! She can't marry 'Master Black' She has to marry the Noble Killer... Pleasee Update soon, I don't think i can wait to hear what happens next! x
1MollieeOh lord! She can't marry 'Master Black' She has to marry the Noble Killer... Pleasee Update soon, I don't think i can wait to hear what happens next! x
6/16/2012 c11 1lovingstories
First off I'm just going to say, thanks for updating so soon, I'm really excited to read this and find out who covered her mouth. :)
Go Isabella, defend yourself. Man I"d be freaked out falling into a dead body.
Gosh I didn't think that was actually Edward behind her. Did he follow her or was he already there and if he was why? Did Madame Corban tell Edward that Isabella had asked about his father's name? At least Bella didn't freeze up in terror but Edward should have known better than to just grab her like that especially when he knows that she thinks its him. Ha, she cut him! He deserves that I think for scaring her and not going to talk to her in the last chapter.
Hmm I'm sure Edward is frustrated and hating that Isabella doesn't trust him again at all.
Oh my even after the note Isabella is still determined to be right. But what knowledge exactly was it talking about? Just that, that was where Edwards father had forged swords and did something illegal? Is Edwards sibling that may or may not exist the Snatcher? After all they know who he is.
Edward needs her to know that he didn't do it, he wants her trust again, I"m sure of it. I don't know that he exactly believes that she does know it either.
Aww, he's comforting her now and what a turn of events of thought and feelings for the two of them.
Finally! He's finally going tell her what he knows, Must have realized that she was going to be a part of 'this' wheater he wanted her to or not, and I bet he does kind of want her to be, except for her own safety maybe.
Oh Bella, it's nice to know you have simple fears as well and aren't perfect. :) Gives us some humor as well.
Whoa wait, they're at the Cullen Mansion, I thought he was going to tell her what he knew.
She's in shock from not just the horse but what she saw, Edward can't leave her alone so it's a good thing he's going to still tell her. Always a gentleman.
Dang it, so he was the son. Hmph.
I'm not hearing anything about a sibling I'll have to go find the spot that reminded me of that and see if I misunderstood. Poor Edward, to have to live with that now after knowing better.
No! I was right and and oh my the girl was his sister?
Edward you didn't know, listen to Bella. See when you knew you did something.
Now he has a brother too? I don't know what to think anymore.
It's good that Edward finally told her. He needed to hear what she had to say.
And now they're kissing. :) Can it get any better? Obviously not, it had to get worse, just when Edward call her his 'love'. Sometimes I really hate Jacob. Does Edward know of this? He should have brought her back to his house not the Cullen's. Why is Jacob up now anyways?
This better not be what I think it is. NO! How could you Edward? Best Man and even pay. You love Bella! and you don't want her to marry Jacob, the only reason I can think for why you would do such a thing is because you didn't think Isabella would want to stick around and whould want to get out as soon as possible but then you couldn't help it and when she reacted so unexpectedly you kissed her. Just like you had wanted to. Now what? She sloves you too.
Please, please, please update soon, I want to know what Isabella's reation is going to be to this news and how Edward explains himself to her. Gosh I can't believe it, that's the worst turn of events that could happen after they kissed, I guess I have that at least, they did get to kiss once.
1lovingstoriesFirst off I'm just going to say, thanks for updating so soon, I'm really excited to read this and find out who covered her mouth. :)
Go Isabella, defend yourself. Man I"d be freaked out falling into a dead body.
Gosh I didn't think that was actually Edward behind her. Did he follow her or was he already there and if he was why? Did Madame Corban tell Edward that Isabella had asked about his father's name? At least Bella didn't freeze up in terror but Edward should have known better than to just grab her like that especially when he knows that she thinks its him. Ha, she cut him! He deserves that I think for scaring her and not going to talk to her in the last chapter.
Hmm I'm sure Edward is frustrated and hating that Isabella doesn't trust him again at all.
Oh my even after the note Isabella is still determined to be right. But what knowledge exactly was it talking about? Just that, that was where Edwards father had forged swords and did something illegal? Is Edwards sibling that may or may not exist the Snatcher? After all they know who he is.
Edward needs her to know that he didn't do it, he wants her trust again, I"m sure of it. I don't know that he exactly believes that she does know it either.
Aww, he's comforting her now and what a turn of events of thought and feelings for the two of them.
Finally! He's finally going tell her what he knows, Must have realized that she was going to be a part of 'this' wheater he wanted her to or not, and I bet he does kind of want her to be, except for her own safety maybe.
Oh Bella, it's nice to know you have simple fears as well and aren't perfect. :) Gives us some humor as well.
Whoa wait, they're at the Cullen Mansion, I thought he was going to tell her what he knew.
She's in shock from not just the horse but what she saw, Edward can't leave her alone so it's a good thing he's going to still tell her. Always a gentleman.
Dang it, so he was the son. Hmph.
I'm not hearing anything about a sibling I'll have to go find the spot that reminded me of that and see if I misunderstood. Poor Edward, to have to live with that now after knowing better.
No! I was right and and oh my the girl was his sister?
Edward you didn't know, listen to Bella. See when you knew you did something.
Now he has a brother too? I don't know what to think anymore.
It's good that Edward finally told her. He needed to hear what she had to say.
And now they're kissing. :) Can it get any better? Obviously not, it had to get worse, just when Edward call her his 'love'. Sometimes I really hate Jacob. Does Edward know of this? He should have brought her back to his house not the Cullen's. Why is Jacob up now anyways?
This better not be what I think it is. NO! How could you Edward? Best Man and even pay. You love Bella! and you don't want her to marry Jacob, the only reason I can think for why you would do such a thing is because you didn't think Isabella would want to stick around and whould want to get out as soon as possible but then you couldn't help it and when she reacted so unexpectedly you kissed her. Just like you had wanted to. Now what? She sloves you too.
Please, please, please update soon, I want to know what Isabella's reation is going to be to this news and how Edward explains himself to her. Gosh I can't believe it, that's the worst turn of events that could happen after they kissed, I guess I have that at least, they did get to kiss once.
6/16/2012 c11 4Till2NiteDoUsPart
I dont normally review but I've now stayed up several hours later than I should have and should be asleep... But OMG HOW CAN THIS HAPPEN? Just when things finally make sense and they could be together, this happens? Kinda frustrating :/ I want to read a HEA! Haha love the story, the darkness of Tudor London is chillingly romantic and sounds so authentic :) please, I beg you, do not allow this farce of an engagement go through for long!
4Till2NiteDoUsPartI dont normally review but I've now stayed up several hours later than I should have and should be asleep... But OMG HOW CAN THIS HAPPEN? Just when things finally make sense and they could be together, this happens? Kinda frustrating :/ I want to read a HEA! Haha love the story, the darkness of Tudor London is chillingly romantic and sounds so authentic :) please, I beg you, do not allow this farce of an engagement go through for long!
6/16/2012 c11 12MuggleBornWY
The only thing I was thinking was, 'Edward, you idiot!' How can he just...kiss her, then pay for her wedding? Oh gawd, poor Isabella. She must be mortified...
But then again, it'd be absolutely delightful (I'm such a sadist) to see Edward jealous because of Jacob's affections towards Bella. Ah, well.
The next chapter should be rather chaotic, I believe. I'm so looking forward to it!xD May you update sooner, girl! Too bad this isn't a real book...*sigh*
Looking forward to the next chapter,
-WY
12MuggleBornWYThe only thing I was thinking was, 'Edward, you idiot!' How can he just...kiss her, then pay for her wedding? Oh gawd, poor Isabella. She must be mortified...
But then again, it'd be absolutely delightful (I'm such a sadist) to see Edward jealous because of Jacob's affections towards Bella. Ah, well.
The next chapter should be rather chaotic, I believe. I'm so looking forward to it!xD May you update sooner, girl! Too bad this isn't a real book...*sigh*
Looking forward to the next chapter,
-WY
6/16/2012 c11 1angeline95
Edward's story is so sad! But I'm a little confused about how Mrs. Maple fits into it. Also, I hope that Edward's father is rotting in hell. I think that Edward does have a brother, he just can't figure out who it is, and the brother is the one kidnapping the poor. I'm chanting HEA for Edward and Bella!
1angeline95Edward's story is so sad! But I'm a little confused about how Mrs. Maple fits into it. Also, I hope that Edward's father is rotting in hell. I think that Edward does have a brother, he just can't figure out who it is, and the brother is the one kidnapping the poor. I'm chanting HEA for Edward and Bella!
6/16/2012 c11 ayenashaneez
amazing chapter! cant wait to find out more! :)
amazing chapter! cant wait to find out more! :)
6/16/2012 c11 sarah
loved it! such a clffy too!
loved it! such a clffy too!
6/16/2012 c11 2Wooleywews
OMG... OMG! My heart is beating so hard in my chest right now... You solve one cliff-hanger-AMAZINGLY, by the way-and then create a worse one! You are evil. An excellent writer but an evil one nonetheless. LOL
I can totally see the parallel with SM's characters. Where Eddie thought he was evil for "going off the rails" as a vampire that knew a better way, so too does your Edward feel extreme remorse for something that was simply bad circumstances. Could they have done something to change those circumstances? Perhaps. But they didn't. And now they are doing everything they can to "atone" for not only their own believed sins, but those of others that were close to them (Eddie Jasper, Edward his father).
And the passion and understanding that's between ExB now, as shown in this Chap... Wonderful. I see you still show Jacob as a slobbering but kindhearted puppy. How in the world, in this particular social circle, are you going to get them out of this? Especially when the one excuse that would have worked, Jacob finding them in a compromising position, Jacob ignored? (Like the overly happy and immature pup that he is.)
Ohhhhhhhhh... Cannot WAIT for the next Chap!
You rock.
2WooleywewsOMG... OMG! My heart is beating so hard in my chest right now... You solve one cliff-hanger-AMAZINGLY, by the way-and then create a worse one! You are evil. An excellent writer but an evil one nonetheless. LOL
I can totally see the parallel with SM's characters. Where Eddie thought he was evil for "going off the rails" as a vampire that knew a better way, so too does your Edward feel extreme remorse for something that was simply bad circumstances. Could they have done something to change those circumstances? Perhaps. But they didn't. And now they are doing everything they can to "atone" for not only their own believed sins, but those of others that were close to them (Eddie Jasper, Edward his father).
And the passion and understanding that's between ExB now, as shown in this Chap... Wonderful. I see you still show Jacob as a slobbering but kindhearted puppy. How in the world, in this particular social circle, are you going to get them out of this? Especially when the one excuse that would have worked, Jacob finding them in a compromising position, Jacob ignored? (Like the overly happy and immature pup that he is.)
Ohhhhhhhhh... Cannot WAIT for the next Chap!
You rock.
6/16/2012 c11 hafsa
OMG! this has been the best chapter..33 Lord Edward is after all a noble should be called Bella(as a name of affection by all Cullens and of course Edward;)) The story is progressing beautifully.I really really hope Isabella and Edward realize they are meant for each other and Jacob Black should be out of picture soooon! Love triangles SUCK!
OMG! this has been the best chapter..33 Lord Edward is after all a noble should be called Bella(as a name of affection by all Cullens and of course Edward;)) The story is progressing beautifully.I really really hope Isabella and Edward realize they are meant for each other and Jacob Black should be out of picture soooon! Love triangles SUCK!
6/15/2012 c10 Kelsey
Oh my goodness! What? Ah! Once again, I"m on the edge of my seat. I hope you update soon.
Oh my goodness! What? Ah! Once again, I"m on the edge of my seat. I hope you update soon.
6/14/2012 c10 hazerchez
please keep going with this story and update your stories. Yours are some of my favourite fanfics and love reading them. Ahhh who was holding her i hope its Edward :)
please keep going with this story and update your stories. Yours are some of my favourite fanfics and love reading them. Ahhh who was holding her i hope its Edward :)
6/14/2012 c10 TheTwilightTwin
Hey, I just thought I'd let you know how much I love this story, it's so much fun to read, and great procrastination:)I hadn't read fanfic in ages, and your story brought me back.
Keep up the good work!
Hey, I just thought I'd let you know how much I love this story, it's so much fun to read, and great procrastination:)I hadn't read fanfic in ages, and your story brought me back.
Keep up the good work!
6/13/2012 c1 dramaqueen3321
You need to update! I'm dying not knowing what happens! Same with Pas de Trois!
You need to update! I'm dying not knowing what happens! Same with Pas de Trois!
6/11/2012 c10 14twifan115 - deactivated
What. Was. That? Oh my! It's been a long time, and even I was gone, too. The story just keeps on getting better. Though, please don't leave us waiting with that super unsettling cliffhanger. ;) I love how you make everything realistic and awesome, as usual. Happy writing! :)
Bellaward1105
14twifan115 - deactivatedWhat. Was. That? Oh my! It's been a long time, and even I was gone, too. The story just keeps on getting better. Though, please don't leave us waiting with that super unsettling cliffhanger. ;) I love how you make everything realistic and awesome, as usual. Happy writing! :)
Bellaward1105