for Tudor London6/2/2012 c9 team rob
Am...maybe anthony masen
Edwards dad
Edward helps to make up for what his dad "did"
Am...maybe anthony masen
Edwards dad
Edward helps to make up for what his dad "did"
5/30/2012 c8 Jen
Oh Boy! thanks for updating! This is so wonderful. I hope you update again soon.
Oh Boy! thanks for updating! This is so wonderful. I hope you update again soon.
5/28/2012 c8 medward
Perhaps she should verify her target a bit better before she proceeds with the kill! Thanks for the update!
Perhaps she should verify her target a bit better before she proceeds with the kill! Thanks for the update!
5/28/2012 c8 hafsa
This has been by far the best chapter..:)They almost kissed!...the chapter was truly worth the wait.your writing is original and Stephanie Meyer would definately be proud with this exquisite piece of art.EXB moments are just...(sigh)!
Fingers crossed for chapter 9..keep it up!:p
This has been by far the best chapter..:)They almost kissed!...the chapter was truly worth the wait.your writing is original and Stephanie Meyer would definately be proud with this exquisite piece of art.EXB moments are just...(sigh)!
Fingers crossed for chapter 9..keep it up!:p
5/27/2012 c8 NeeNee246
I was so excited to get this update!I have missed it. This is so fantastic! I am very excited for the chapter. ! :)
I was so excited to get this update!I have missed it. This is so fantastic! I am very excited for the chapter. ! :)
5/27/2012 c8 
6Svaler
Oh jolly! You updated! Thank you :) very much so.
I read all your twilight stories.
So I'm glad with any review (Pas de Trois, Short Suger Plum Fairy, this story, and back a few months ago before you finished Clair de Lune) and the greatest thing about your stories is that they have meaning, without the usual M-lemon stuff, which I really detest.
Anyway, I love you, this chapter was great, thought I'm a little stupid, so I didn't get the dreams, where Bella kills somobody, but she kills the wrong person, pissing Edward off.
- Is her fear she'll anger Edward?
- Does she have the dreams because in her dream, SHE HERSELF represents Edward, and in a way, she doesn't like the fact Edward murders, even though those men are bad men..?
- Or is she scared Edward will kill somebody she cares about?
- TELL ME!
Or at least, explain in further chapters the meaning of those dreams :) I'm sure you will.
Keep writing. Love you. Update soon. Take care.
(luf ya!) you're my favorite here on FF.
6SvalerOh jolly! You updated! Thank you :) very much so.
I read all your twilight stories.
So I'm glad with any review (Pas de Trois, Short Suger Plum Fairy, this story, and back a few months ago before you finished Clair de Lune) and the greatest thing about your stories is that they have meaning, without the usual M-lemon stuff, which I really detest.
Anyway, I love you, this chapter was great, thought I'm a little stupid, so I didn't get the dreams, where Bella kills somobody, but she kills the wrong person, pissing Edward off.
- Is her fear she'll anger Edward?
- Does she have the dreams because in her dream, SHE HERSELF represents Edward, and in a way, she doesn't like the fact Edward murders, even though those men are bad men..?
- Or is she scared Edward will kill somebody she cares about?
- TELL ME!
Or at least, explain in further chapters the meaning of those dreams :) I'm sure you will.
Keep writing. Love you. Update soon. Take care.
(luf ya!) you're my favorite here on FF.
5/26/2012 c8 1lovingstories
I want you to know that I didn't get anything done today after I saw this because it was to important to go over the past chapters remind myself of what happened and then read this chapter.
Speaking of which I noticed that Bella's mother's name was Elizabeth, what Edward's mother's name and who's his secret sibling that was hinted at but not actually confirmed? (I'm just saying I don't like this...well, very unlikely connection..at least I hope it's unlikely)
Truthfully I was just thinking about this story the other day hoping to see an update so I"m very glad for this one. Which brings me to the fact that I can't believe they almost kissed! Well I can and I won't deny that I was wanting it to happen but still. Poor Bella she's so confused...(as am I)
I think that there is something personal to all of this still. Afterall Edward very well may not have gone and told even Sebastian about his personal reasons, and I want to know what they are. Where are all the homless people being brought and what does Edward really know about that. What's with the nightmares too? Cause that would suck having that dream, I feel bad for Bella, just saying.
And how does Edward know who Bella is really (or her father was rather), did Carlisle tell him?
I have many more questions but I hope they'll begin to be answered in the coming chapters (hopefully soon ;)?)
Heck if I could seen another update soon I'd take just getting more questions and not receiving answers.
Again loved the chapter :) and looking forward to more.
1lovingstoriesI want you to know that I didn't get anything done today after I saw this because it was to important to go over the past chapters remind myself of what happened and then read this chapter.
Speaking of which I noticed that Bella's mother's name was Elizabeth, what Edward's mother's name and who's his secret sibling that was hinted at but not actually confirmed? (I'm just saying I don't like this...well, very unlikely connection..at least I hope it's unlikely)
Truthfully I was just thinking about this story the other day hoping to see an update so I"m very glad for this one. Which brings me to the fact that I can't believe they almost kissed! Well I can and I won't deny that I was wanting it to happen but still. Poor Bella she's so confused...(as am I)
I think that there is something personal to all of this still. Afterall Edward very well may not have gone and told even Sebastian about his personal reasons, and I want to know what they are. Where are all the homless people being brought and what does Edward really know about that. What's with the nightmares too? Cause that would suck having that dream, I feel bad for Bella, just saying.
And how does Edward know who Bella is really (or her father was rather), did Carlisle tell him?
I have many more questions but I hope they'll begin to be answered in the coming chapters (hopefully soon ;)?)
Heck if I could seen another update soon I'd take just getting more questions and not receiving answers.
Again loved the chapter :) and looking forward to more.
5/26/2012 c8 4Queen of True Love
Interesting, I would love to see where exactly you will go with this :) keep updating :)
4Queen of True LoveInteresting, I would love to see where exactly you will go with this :) keep updating :)
5/26/2012 c8 2Wooleywews
THANK GOD! I've missed this story sooooooooooooooooo much! I'm so glad you've overcome your writer's block. Because, well, you're awesome-your writing is so vivid and strong.
Love it!
:)
2WooleywewsTHANK GOD! I've missed this story sooooooooooooooooo much! I'm so glad you've overcome your writer's block. Because, well, you're awesome-your writing is so vivid and strong.
Love it!
:)
5/26/2012 c8 Luna Shoane
I was so excited when I saw you had posted another chapter! I absolutely love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
I was so excited when I saw you had posted another chapter! I absolutely love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
5/26/2012 c8 11Sweetie7smiled
Wonderful chapter! I'm so glad for the update! And it is great to see more E&B moments. Thanks for writing!
11Sweetie7smiledWonderful chapter! I'm so glad for the update! And it is great to see more E&B moments. Thanks for writing!
5/20/2012 c7 tressa
your story is wonderful and deserves better views. the way you potray edward and bella is simply...amazing. Please do continue this epic story that i have fallen in love with. What you have created here redefines the fan fiction community in many good ways. My love for tudor london is so immensly great that im...hooked with this story. Its like an obbsession,like a crazing that i dont know how to explain. Stephanie Meyer would definately be proud with this exquisite piece of art.
your story is wonderful and deserves better views. the way you potray edward and bella is simply...amazing. Please do continue this epic story that i have fallen in love with. What you have created here redefines the fan fiction community in many good ways. My love for tudor london is so immensly great that im...hooked with this story. Its like an obbsession,like a crazing that i dont know how to explain. Stephanie Meyer would definately be proud with this exquisite piece of art.