
10/23/2011 c19
1Kyoki no Megami
hello there!
or, as kinda prefer to greet people, haifisch~
sooooo... nice story, and i must say - i dislike aika. OCs with "ai" in their name i generally dislike, dunno why. it´s just too... sweet. aido doesn´t count, i think it means something different plus his name is actually hanabusa and my fav chara of DoA is named hanabusa too^^
now, to finish this rater short comment, hope you continue soon (there are so many stopped stories out there. btw, if you stop at least don´t delete the story, kay? i really hate that)
kyoki no megami
maDAlexa

hello there!
or, as kinda prefer to greet people, haifisch~
sooooo... nice story, and i must say - i dislike aika. OCs with "ai" in their name i generally dislike, dunno why. it´s just too... sweet. aido doesn´t count, i think it means something different plus his name is actually hanabusa and my fav chara of DoA is named hanabusa too^^
now, to finish this rater short comment, hope you continue soon (there are so many stopped stories out there. btw, if you stop at least don´t delete the story, kay? i really hate that)
kyoki no megami
maDAlexa
10/7/2011 c19 Karaana
Nice hanger there! You really have earned your audience's attention with the awesome story. ;)
Nice hanger there! You really have earned your audience's attention with the awesome story. ;)
10/3/2011 c19
4Akari.Wolf.Princess
woooo aika! but damn she a B!+Ch hahah still i wonder how this will play out now heheh update!

woooo aika! but damn she a B!+Ch hahah still i wonder how this will play out now heheh update!
10/2/2011 c19
4HichiShirosaki
Why did you have to end there! Why! I wanted to read more! Please update soon. I don't want to wait! XD

Why did you have to end there! Why! I wanted to read more! Please update soon. I don't want to wait! XD
10/2/2011 c19 Professor KanZe
Yay i'm so happy you updated! Ooo, jelousy there, n'aww i'm glad she at least has feelings for Aido now, they make a great couple XD
Yay i'm so happy you updated! Ooo, jelousy there, n'aww i'm glad she at least has feelings for Aido now, they make a great couple XD
10/1/2011 c18 Tee-hee
Man! I wish you would update soon! Really love this story!
Man! I wish you would update soon! Really love this story!